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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. Update soon!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This had me smiling almost all the way through.
Very nice to see our couple so playful with each other,
they need more of that, and we need to see it as well.
Kikyo? Well, it will be interesting to see how you portray her,
so I'll hold judgement on that.
Once again, I'll be waiting for more!
Very nice to see our couple so playful with each other,
they need more of that, and we need to see it as well.
Kikyo? Well, it will be interesting to see how you portray her,
so I'll hold judgement on that.
Once again, I'll be waiting for more!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soo wonderful, I love this story . Such a great idea behind it too. I look forward to the next chapter, hopefully 2 chapters :) You're a really good writer
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I love the way this story is coming along and you are really capturing the attitudes of each character. I love how you're making the characters your own, and yet keeping them true to how Rumiko created them.
All I have to say is Kikyo is this. 'Bitch' lol I really don't like her.
I can't wait to read the next chapter and the future chapters to come. ^^
All I have to say is Kikyo is this. 'Bitch' lol I really don't like her.
I can't wait to read the next chapter and the future chapters to come. ^^
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story so far. Keep up with it.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like it! when is the next chapter?
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start to a great story I look forward to your continued chapters....
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a nice paced story. I love the details and the plot. Thank you for giving us readers a second chapter so very soon. That was kind of you.
Please keep up the great work!!! I can't wait till you get the next one out. I wonder how many chapters long this will be.
Please keep up the great work!!! I can't wait till you get the next one out. I wonder how many chapters long this will be.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the little 'training' she does with yasha. i liked in the manga where she doesn't slam him so much. this chapter reminds me of a really old movie ~if a man answers~ starring sandra dee and bobby darin, the girl marries and seems to be having difficulties until her mother helps the poor girl out with her own secret to marital bliss... a dog training manual. it's a sweet movie.
this is captivating, entertaining, humorous and well written, i will be eagerly anticipating more.
thank you,
ginny
this is captivating, entertaining, humorous and well written, i will be eagerly anticipating more.
thank you,
ginny
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, Becca!
Good characterization, and I really like
that they both seem more mature, less
fighting (even if it is b/c of K's restraint).
Nice to see no 'osuwari's' too. And no
whining, crying Kagome. This definatley
has promise, and I will be watching!
Good characterization, and I really like
that they both seem more mature, less
fighting (even if it is b/c of K's restraint).
Nice to see no 'osuwari's' too. And no
whining, crying Kagome. This definatley
has promise, and I will be watching!