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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVING IT! THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!LOVING ITTT!!!
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Learning to Love is a great story. I thought
their interaction was extremely romantic. I hope
you continue on with this story. I must know how
it ends. Please update soon, and good luck!
their interaction was extremely romantic. I hope
you continue on with this story. I must know how
it ends. Please update soon, and good luck!
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, at least they're home now. Can't wait to read what happens next in your story. I'll be waiting
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the treat hahahahaha wow sigh well then i am just reviewing to let you know i love your story keep up the good work ^_^
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is wonderful!
But alas, words of constructive criticism >.>
If you don't have a beta, I'd highly suggest getting one...
Well, even if you do, I'd suggest getting a second... (No offense to anyone ^^)
There were a few gramatical things I noticed... Things such as using 'u' for 'you' and 'thru' for 'through.'
Just figured I'd throw that out there.
Always good to have a grammar freak beta AND one that specializes in said anime characters.
Two good looks is better than one!
Anyway, that's all for now.
Kudos for the good plot. It's unlike any other I've seen!
~Hitomi
But alas, words of constructive criticism >.>
If you don't have a beta, I'd highly suggest getting one...
Well, even if you do, I'd suggest getting a second... (No offense to anyone ^^)
There were a few gramatical things I noticed... Things such as using 'u' for 'you' and 'thru' for 'through.'
Just figured I'd throw that out there.
Always good to have a grammar freak beta AND one that specializes in said anime characters.
Two good looks is better than one!
Anyway, that's all for now.
Kudos for the good plot. It's unlike any other I've seen!
~Hitomi
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where to begin? This was an awsome story. I couldn't stop reading it. This story was so captivating. It was written with execelent detial, and a really powerful story line. I have only one thing in subjective critism though. If you forget about a great story like this you are a fool indead. This is to good of a story to let fall to the slums of forgot fanfics. This story definitly has won my seal of approval.
Sincerly,
The Prince of Madness
Sincerly,
The Prince of Madness
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story I look forward to the next chapter.Thank you
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come on you have to update soon. i want to know what happens when sesshomaru goes into and what everyone's reaction will be when sesshomaru returns home with a mate in tow already pupped. looking forward to a new chapter i hope soon.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. i think it is perfect. update soon. i want to know what next. especially when sesshomaru's heat hits him.