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January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story with an awesome plot I love the way it flows togetheri hope u keep up the great work I cant wait to see where u take this story
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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read Ch.21 and when I saw the A.N.,I felt guilty for saying I noticed the name mix up between Sessh and Ikaru's mom's.I'm really sorry and I hope you'll accept my apology.When I noticed it I felt like letting you know was the right thing to do,I felt awkward about saying it in a review but, I couldn't find a less public way of telling you. I would've rather sent it to you in a PM or something similar but after looking for another way I couldn't find any other option. I really enjoyed this chapter. There are some parts I'm confused about but I don't know if I should mention them in a review. I wonder what will happen with this fight Kagome is to have with Ikaru. I recall Ericka reminding them they are still connected by the spell placed on them when they got to the island(the one to keep them close together physically and feel each others pain?) & since Ericka said she placed the mark of the Royal Family of the West on Kagomes forehead so that all may know that you belong to their household and as a precautionary measure(?) I can't help but wonder if the fight was one of the things the mark to help prevent. It seems odd that there isn't another option considering that they were meant to be together by the will of the Kami's,born to be together,Sessh fought her,he and his beast chose her,mated and marked her as their lifemate and she is carrying their pup or pups... all these things but,there is no option other than Kagome having to fight someone for the right to be his mate.
After all the things that Ericka mentioned,I'm curious what changes Kagome will go through and what powers and abilities she will gain.
Ericka said "You felt you were different from your friends and family because you were; you were always different Kagome, because you were made to be with Sesshoumaru".Then Kagome asked if she was human & she said "You were born a human Kagome,don't be confused about that,you merely had some enhanced abilities.While you were in your mother's womb the Kami gifted you with several gifts that would make you better able to handle the hardships that you would be forced to endure when you matured into a woman. The majority of these gifts,however,would not manifest themselves until you met Sesshoumaru and mixed his blood with yours. This activated the rest of your latent abilities; you will slowly discover what those abilities are as time moves on. Your senses, strength, stamina and speed are even greater than they were before, but that is only the tip of the anthill so to speak, but that is for you to figure out on your own my dear. Kagome to be honest I have no idea what to classify you as, you are no longer human, but not a demon, nor are you a hanyo. Hmmm, maybe a type of tennyo? That sounds as good as anything at this point." Ericka said shrugging her shoulders.Then she said,"One of the gifts Kagome was given was the ability to birth full demon pups, she is the only human in the world with that ability. This was given to her to make it easier for you and your children in the years to come, but it will also come with its share of complications as well, so you must guard your mate well Sesshoumaru". One thing that confused me was that in the same chapter that she told them all the above, Ericka said that-"Kagome, when you took in Sesshoumaru's blood it changed your body. You are no longer human, but not demon either, more like a hybrid, as such your body's requirements have changed-you will be required to feed on blood regularly to keep your health and strength up; much like a demon does. Your child will not be a half breed, since Kagome was not technically human when she became pregnant, it will be something greater because Kagome had a hidden power within her that she was unaware of. She was never a normal human"(?). I can't wait to find out why Sessh's family thought she smelled like some type of demon when they first met her or why his dad was so confused that he couldn't think.I wonder if Ericka will show up before this fight to help,advise or explain about this being the will of the Kami's. I'm curious bout 2 things that I will ask about;first,if Kagome was made to be with Sessh,was he made to be with her and if so,are they soul mates? & the second,we know she's a virgin from the beginning of the story but Sessh we're never really told but the first morning on the island when they went to bathe & suddenly couldn't move apart & they kissed afterward Sessh was thinking that she awakened a passion in him that no woman had ever managed to achieve before; though many had tried & we know that this is the 1st time Sessh will be affected by mating season & all he seems to know is what his dad told him to expect ...(no foreplay or preparing her just right to it,made me hop if he's this eager & uncreative I hope he's a virgin too)it's never mentioned but it seems like he's a virgin & he just follows his instincts when they mate the 1st time which is exactly what she did. The 1st morning..I know they'd only known each other a day as enemies being forced together,when he woke sleeping with her,feeling something,with his beast all comfy,realizing his 1st mating season(& worst) is coming but deciding it was too early to warn her,wanting to let her keep her piece of mind because he felt he could control it a while longer,at 1st I thought he was rude, cruel or mean,when he thought to himself that he didn't need a skittish virgin on his hands.While I know it was his 1st time about to lose control of himself to lust & he'd been told his whole life that when it happened his beast would take over & rape the girl & it was his 1st time going through the hormone thing & she was an innocent female & he felt they were being manipulated and he was upset about it,him thinking of her as a skittish virgin if he told her he was going to lose it and rape her then that doesn't mean he himself isn't a virgin(At this point,from what his dad told him,it only means he'll have to deal with her if she freaks out until his beast takes over & his beast will mindlessly rape her with no concern for her & then give him back control to deal with the damage,right?)...Argh,I just want to know if he was still a virgin too..I know it's silly but are we ever going to find out because I'm dying of curiosity about that?(When I think about it,I don't know if I'm just being a hopeless romantic and I think I just think it'd be sweet & romantic if neither had ever been with another.Plus,with all she's been through,has to still go through & as insecure as she is,it would hurt her terribly if a female he'd been with in the past came up to throw it in her face.There are so many FF with Kagome going through angst & I love this story so I don't want to see her suffer more than she has to & I'm a sucker for a happy ending & so you can ignore this litte rant because it's likely my inner sissy who has become huge since I had a hysterectomy 6 months ago & I'm in early/forced menopause & I swear I cry at the drop of a hat & get mushy & hot flashes in florida...please just pity me and ignore me.I'll shut up now)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and I can't wait to see what some of Kagome's new powers and abilities will be or what other changes she'll go through. I love your story and I'll try not to hold my breath until I can read more.
After all the things that Ericka mentioned,I'm curious what changes Kagome will go through and what powers and abilities she will gain.
Ericka said "You felt you were different from your friends and family because you were; you were always different Kagome, because you were made to be with Sesshoumaru".Then Kagome asked if she was human & she said "You were born a human Kagome,don't be confused about that,you merely had some enhanced abilities.While you were in your mother's womb the Kami gifted you with several gifts that would make you better able to handle the hardships that you would be forced to endure when you matured into a woman. The majority of these gifts,however,would not manifest themselves until you met Sesshoumaru and mixed his blood with yours. This activated the rest of your latent abilities; you will slowly discover what those abilities are as time moves on. Your senses, strength, stamina and speed are even greater than they were before, but that is only the tip of the anthill so to speak, but that is for you to figure out on your own my dear. Kagome to be honest I have no idea what to classify you as, you are no longer human, but not a demon, nor are you a hanyo. Hmmm, maybe a type of tennyo? That sounds as good as anything at this point." Ericka said shrugging her shoulders.Then she said,"One of the gifts Kagome was given was the ability to birth full demon pups, she is the only human in the world with that ability. This was given to her to make it easier for you and your children in the years to come, but it will also come with its share of complications as well, so you must guard your mate well Sesshoumaru". One thing that confused me was that in the same chapter that she told them all the above, Ericka said that-"Kagome, when you took in Sesshoumaru's blood it changed your body. You are no longer human, but not demon either, more like a hybrid, as such your body's requirements have changed-you will be required to feed on blood regularly to keep your health and strength up; much like a demon does. Your child will not be a half breed, since Kagome was not technically human when she became pregnant, it will be something greater because Kagome had a hidden power within her that she was unaware of. She was never a normal human"(?). I can't wait to find out why Sessh's family thought she smelled like some type of demon when they first met her or why his dad was so confused that he couldn't think.I wonder if Ericka will show up before this fight to help,advise or explain about this being the will of the Kami's. I'm curious bout 2 things that I will ask about;first,if Kagome was made to be with Sessh,was he made to be with her and if so,are they soul mates? & the second,we know she's a virgin from the beginning of the story but Sessh we're never really told but the first morning on the island when they went to bathe & suddenly couldn't move apart & they kissed afterward Sessh was thinking that she awakened a passion in him that no woman had ever managed to achieve before; though many had tried & we know that this is the 1st time Sessh will be affected by mating season & all he seems to know is what his dad told him to expect ...(no foreplay or preparing her just right to it,made me hop if he's this eager & uncreative I hope he's a virgin too)it's never mentioned but it seems like he's a virgin & he just follows his instincts when they mate the 1st time which is exactly what she did. The 1st morning..I know they'd only known each other a day as enemies being forced together,when he woke sleeping with her,feeling something,with his beast all comfy,realizing his 1st mating season(& worst) is coming but deciding it was too early to warn her,wanting to let her keep her piece of mind because he felt he could control it a while longer,at 1st I thought he was rude, cruel or mean,when he thought to himself that he didn't need a skittish virgin on his hands.While I know it was his 1st time about to lose control of himself to lust & he'd been told his whole life that when it happened his beast would take over & rape the girl & it was his 1st time going through the hormone thing & she was an innocent female & he felt they were being manipulated and he was upset about it,him thinking of her as a skittish virgin if he told her he was going to lose it and rape her then that doesn't mean he himself isn't a virgin(At this point,from what his dad told him,it only means he'll have to deal with her if she freaks out until his beast takes over & his beast will mindlessly rape her with no concern for her & then give him back control to deal with the damage,right?)...Argh,I just want to know if he was still a virgin too..I know it's silly but are we ever going to find out because I'm dying of curiosity about that?(When I think about it,I don't know if I'm just being a hopeless romantic and I think I just think it'd be sweet & romantic if neither had ever been with another.Plus,with all she's been through,has to still go through & as insecure as she is,it would hurt her terribly if a female he'd been with in the past came up to throw it in her face.There are so many FF with Kagome going through angst & I love this story so I don't want to see her suffer more than she has to & I'm a sucker for a happy ending & so you can ignore this litte rant because it's likely my inner sissy who has become huge since I had a hysterectomy 6 months ago & I'm in early/forced menopause & I swear I cry at the drop of a hat & get mushy & hot flashes in florida...please just pity me and ignore me.I'll shut up now)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and I can't wait to see what some of Kagome's new powers and abilities will be or what other changes she'll go through. I love your story and I'll try not to hold my breath until I can read more.
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When I read the A.N.(in Ch.21),I felt guilty for saying that I had noticed the name mix up between Sessh and Ikaru's mom's.I'm really sorry and I hope you'll accept my apology because I felt really awkward writing about it in a review. When I noticed it I felt that letting you know was the right thing to do but I couldn't find a less public way of telling you and I wish I could've sent you a PM or something but after looking for another way I couldn't find any other option . I really enjoyed the new chapter. There are some parts that I'm confused about but I don't know or think I should say anything about what I don't understand. I wonder what will happen with this fight Kagome is to have with Ikaru because Ericka said that they are still connected by the spell that was placed on them when they got to the island(the one to keep them close together when needed and feel each others pain?) & since Ericka said she placed the mark of the Royal Family of the West on Kagomes forehead so that all may know that you belong to their household and as a precautionary measure(?) I can't help but wonder if there is another option other than Kagome having to fight someone for the right to be his mate.
I'm looking forward to finding out what changes Kagome will be going through because of all the things that Ericka mentioned. Ericka said "You felt you were different from your friends and family because you were; you were always different Kagome, because you were made to be with Sesshoumaru"
Then Kagome asked if she was human & she said "You were born a human Kagome, don't be confused about that, you merely had some enhanced abilities. While you were in your mother's womb the kami gifted you with several gifts that would make you better able to handle the hardships that you would be forced to endure when you matured into a woman. The majority of these gifts, however, would not manifest themselves until you met Sesshoumaru and mixed his blood with yours. This activated the rest of your latent abilities; you will slowly discover what those abilities are as time moves on. Your senses, strength, stamina and speed are even greater than they were before, but that is only the tip of the anthill so to speak, but that is for you to figure out on your own my dear. Kagome to be honest I have no idea what to classify you as, you are no longer human, but not a demon, nor are you a hanyo. Hmmm, maybe a type of tennyo? That sounds as good as anything at this point." Ericka said shrugging her shoulders.Then she said,"One of the gifts Kagome was given was the ability to birth full demon pups, she is the only human in the world with that ability. This was given to her to make it easier for you and your children in the years to come, but it will also come with its share of complications as well, so you must guard your mate well Sesshoumaru". I'm a bit confused that in the same chapter that she told them all the above, Ericka said that-"Kagome, when you took in Sesshoumaru's blood it changed your body. You are no longer human, but not demon either, more like a hybrid, as such your body's requirements have changed-you will be required to feed on blood regularly to keep your health and strength up; much like a demon does. Your child will not be a half breed, since Kagome was not technically human when she became pregnant, it will be something greater because Kagome had a hidden power within her that she was unaware of. She was never a normal human"(?). I can't wait to find out why Sessh's family thought she smelled like some type of demon when they first met her or why his dad was so confused that he couldn't think.I wonder if Ericka will show up before this fight to help,advise or explain about this being the will of the Kami's. I'm curious bout 2 things that I will ask about;first,if Kagome was made to be with Sessh,was he made to be with her and if so,are they soul mates? & the second,we know she's a virgin from the beginning of the story but Sessh we're never really told but the first morning on the island when they went to bathe & suddenly couldn't move apart & they kissed afterward Sessh was thinking that she awakened a passion in him that no woman had ever managed to achieve before; though many had tried & we know that this is the 1st time Sessh will be affected by mating season & all he seems to know is what his dad told him to expect ...it's never mentioned but it seems like he's a virgin & he just follows his instincts when they mate the 1st time which is exactly what she did.The only difference seemed that he'd been taught more and told what to expect..but when woke that 1st morning..I know they'd only known each other a day as enemies being forced together,when he woke sleeping with her,feeling something,with his beast all comfy,realizing his 1st mating season(& worst) is coming but deciding it was too early to warn her,wanting to let her keep her piece of mind because he felt he could control it a while longer..when he thought to himself that he didn't need a skittish virgin on his hands,while I know if it was his 1st time about to lose control of himself to lust & being told his whole life that when it happened his beast would take over & rape the girl & it was his 1st time going through the hormone thing & she was an innocent female & he felt they were being manipulated and he was upset about it,him thinking of her as a skittish virgin if he told her he was going to lose it and rape her then that doesn't mean he himself isn't a virgin(At this point,from what his dad told him,it only means he'll have to deal with her if she freaks out until his beast takes over & his beast will mindlessly rape her with no concern for her & then give him back control to deal with the damage,right?)...Argh,I just want to know if he was still a virgin too..I know it's silly but are we ever going to find out because I'm dying of curiosity about that?(When I think about it,I'm just being a hopeless romantic and I think I just think it'd be sweet & romantic if neither had ever been with another.Plus,with all she's been through,has to still go through & with as insecure as she is,it would hurt her terribly if a female he'd been with in the past came up to throw it in her face.There are so many FF with Kagome going through angst & I love this story so I don't want to see her suffer more than she has to & I'm a sucker for a happy ending & so you can ignore this litte rant because it's likely my inner sissy who has become huge since I had a hysterectomy 6 months ago & I'm in early/forced menopause & I swear I cry at the drop of a hat & get mushy & hot flashes in florida...please just pity me and ignore me.I'll shut up now)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and I can't wait to see what some of Kagome's new powers and abilities will be or what other changes she'll go through. I love your story and I'll try not to hold my breath until I can read more.
I'm looking forward to finding out what changes Kagome will be going through because of all the things that Ericka mentioned. Ericka said "You felt you were different from your friends and family because you were; you were always different Kagome, because you were made to be with Sesshoumaru"
Then Kagome asked if she was human & she said "You were born a human Kagome, don't be confused about that, you merely had some enhanced abilities. While you were in your mother's womb the kami gifted you with several gifts that would make you better able to handle the hardships that you would be forced to endure when you matured into a woman. The majority of these gifts, however, would not manifest themselves until you met Sesshoumaru and mixed his blood with yours. This activated the rest of your latent abilities; you will slowly discover what those abilities are as time moves on. Your senses, strength, stamina and speed are even greater than they were before, but that is only the tip of the anthill so to speak, but that is for you to figure out on your own my dear. Kagome to be honest I have no idea what to classify you as, you are no longer human, but not a demon, nor are you a hanyo. Hmmm, maybe a type of tennyo? That sounds as good as anything at this point." Ericka said shrugging her shoulders.Then she said,"One of the gifts Kagome was given was the ability to birth full demon pups, she is the only human in the world with that ability. This was given to her to make it easier for you and your children in the years to come, but it will also come with its share of complications as well, so you must guard your mate well Sesshoumaru". I'm a bit confused that in the same chapter that she told them all the above, Ericka said that-"Kagome, when you took in Sesshoumaru's blood it changed your body. You are no longer human, but not demon either, more like a hybrid, as such your body's requirements have changed-you will be required to feed on blood regularly to keep your health and strength up; much like a demon does. Your child will not be a half breed, since Kagome was not technically human when she became pregnant, it will be something greater because Kagome had a hidden power within her that she was unaware of. She was never a normal human"(?). I can't wait to find out why Sessh's family thought she smelled like some type of demon when they first met her or why his dad was so confused that he couldn't think.I wonder if Ericka will show up before this fight to help,advise or explain about this being the will of the Kami's. I'm curious bout 2 things that I will ask about;first,if Kagome was made to be with Sessh,was he made to be with her and if so,are they soul mates? & the second,we know she's a virgin from the beginning of the story but Sessh we're never really told but the first morning on the island when they went to bathe & suddenly couldn't move apart & they kissed afterward Sessh was thinking that she awakened a passion in him that no woman had ever managed to achieve before; though many had tried & we know that this is the 1st time Sessh will be affected by mating season & all he seems to know is what his dad told him to expect ...it's never mentioned but it seems like he's a virgin & he just follows his instincts when they mate the 1st time which is exactly what she did.The only difference seemed that he'd been taught more and told what to expect..but when woke that 1st morning..I know they'd only known each other a day as enemies being forced together,when he woke sleeping with her,feeling something,with his beast all comfy,realizing his 1st mating season(& worst) is coming but deciding it was too early to warn her,wanting to let her keep her piece of mind because he felt he could control it a while longer..when he thought to himself that he didn't need a skittish virgin on his hands,while I know if it was his 1st time about to lose control of himself to lust & being told his whole life that when it happened his beast would take over & rape the girl & it was his 1st time going through the hormone thing & she was an innocent female & he felt they were being manipulated and he was upset about it,him thinking of her as a skittish virgin if he told her he was going to lose it and rape her then that doesn't mean he himself isn't a virgin(At this point,from what his dad told him,it only means he'll have to deal with her if she freaks out until his beast takes over & his beast will mindlessly rape her with no concern for her & then give him back control to deal with the damage,right?)...Argh,I just want to know if he was still a virgin too..I know it's silly but are we ever going to find out because I'm dying of curiosity about that?(When I think about it,I'm just being a hopeless romantic and I think I just think it'd be sweet & romantic if neither had ever been with another.Plus,with all she's been through,has to still go through & with as insecure as she is,it would hurt her terribly if a female he'd been with in the past came up to throw it in her face.There are so many FF with Kagome going through angst & I love this story so I don't want to see her suffer more than she has to & I'm a sucker for a happy ending & so you can ignore this litte rant because it's likely my inner sissy who has become huge since I had a hysterectomy 6 months ago & I'm in early/forced menopause & I swear I cry at the drop of a hat & get mushy & hot flashes in florida...please just pity me and ignore me.I'll shut up now)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and I can't wait to see what some of Kagome's new powers and abilities will be or what other changes she'll go through. I love your story and I'll try not to hold my breath until I can read more.
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January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like the new chapter but I'm confused about something and when I read the A.N.,I felt terrible about that I noticed the name mix up between Sessh and Ikaru's mom's. I felt awkward writing about it in a review and I wish I could have sent a P.M. with the info but,that wasn't an option. I don't know if I should say anything about what I'm confused about this time but that after the extreme circumstances that the gods/kamis went to make sure Kagome and Sessh met,fell in love, became mated and most importantly,they kept them on the island till Kagome was with pup/pups.Why would they go through all of that only to have Kagome fight in a viscous battle against Ikaru(who promises to fight to win,which means she's going to fight her hardest against Kagome)in order to win the right to be Sessh's Mate? Why hasn't Ericka shown up to help or advise Kagome (& Sessh's family) about another option to deal with the 'vipers'? Then again Kagome should be getting her new powers and Ericka said she's kinda like a tennyo and apparently Sessh's family thinks she smells like some type of demon so maybe they'll (her new powers) come to her instinctually and she'll be powerful enough to kick some major ass and win quickly. I understand why Ikaru came up with the idea but I don't understand why Sessh or Ericka didn't prepare a pregnant Kagome for this sort of situation. I kind of understand why Ikaru knocked out Sessh in the very beginning but I imagine he's going to be very pissed off at Ikaru for jeopardizing Kagome and his pup (or pups) and not allowing him to have any say in how to handle this. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and I can't wait to see what some of Kagome's new powers and abilities will be or what other changes she'll go through
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December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited about this story that I started to reread it again but I read all the A.N.'s this time & I noticed that they mentioned other sites where this story was being written. I went to Dokuga & reread it again. I just couldn't help myself,I really enjoy this story & I love the style it is written in. I love the flashbacks,dreams & all the details that Ericka lets slip. I love the direction the story is going & I like the way that Kagome's changing. I like the idea that they were made for each other,that she'll birth full demon pups,the fact that she's already so fast that she barely touches the ground (& Sessh had a hard time tracking her scent) & I can't wait to see how much more she'll change & what those change's will be like for her physically & in her scent & aura. I'm also very nervous now about where the story left off,with Sessh,Kagome & Rin walking into the scene with Sessh's dad & sister ,Ikaru, having it out with the vipers(females that want to mate Sessh) & the fact that the word 'challenge' was mentioned. I pray that Kagome can't be challenged while pregnant with Sessh's pup or pups(I thought the possibility of her carrying more than one pup when I realized that she got morning sickness almost immediately & the importance of her & Sessh mating). I really hope that now that he's mated & she's pupped that no challenges can be made & that was the reason that the Kami's kept them on the island untill they were mated & she was pregnant. I can't wait for the next chapter so I beg & plead with you to continue this story before I start to cry.......need more....PLEASE!!!!!!
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December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited by the new chapter that I reread the entire story. I really liked the new chapter but I'm confused by something. As I reread the story I noticed that Sessh's mom & Lord Inutaisho's first Mate was Lady Serenity,the 1st lady of the Western Lands. Lady Sakura was Ikaru's birth Mom & the Lady of the Eastern Lands. In the early chapters-where Ikaru was young & visiting,when they had to save her life & in the letter from her parents & when Sessh's mom died. There was only 1 other time that the names were confused & that was when they decided to do the blood exchange to save Ikaru but this last chapter kept stating Sakura was the 1st Lady of The Western Lands ? I hope I don't upset anyone with this but wasn't Sakura Ikaru's mom & Serenity Sessh's mom & the 1st Lady of the Western Lands,like it was mentioned in the early chapters??
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December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. There was an evil cliffy at the end of this one & I can't wait to see what happens from here.I also can't wait to see what strange powers,abilities & changes Kagome is going to soon have.I wonder if he,his father & sister will be able to sense the changes in her,either by look ,scent ,aura or otherwise. I hope they start to manifest in her soon because it seems,she may need help if she's going to have face the pack of vipers at some point & possibly alone. I wanted to ask if Ericka's mention that Kagome was basically,similar to a tennyo was a hint of some kind?
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story & I hope there will be more. I'm dying to find out what happens next. I still have yet to find out if there is a way I can get an email when there is an update to a story.
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh this was very good i loved it i hope you update soon
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hello there,
Just letting you know I really like your story and hope that you continue it very soon.
Just letting you know I really like your story and hope that you continue it very soon.