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I love that this story doesn't have Kagome portrayed as weak and helpless. It seems almost everyone has her as weak, defenseless and so caught up with being madly in love with Inu and always being hurt by his constant desire to compare her to Kikyo and him always running off to be with the golem. I like it better when she isn't that way and can stand up for herself and I really like it when she isn't portrayed as being Kikyo's reincarnation because I find Kikyo repulsive. Thank you for this story again

That was quite a good idea I must agree to give Ah and Un a mate. I've always wondered about the 2 headed dragon.

Oh my god. Please keep this fan fiction coming. I am completely in love with it. I usually hate reading ones where it goes off and tells other peoples story too much but this is just so well written and thought out. I just love it. Can't wait to read more!

I love your fanfic it is so amazing , by far one of the best I have ever read please dont stop writting im dying for you to continue on with this wonderful story you have me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for writting my most favorit story.
Sincerely yours steph.

i don't understand why kagome can't see sesshoumaru or sleep next to him?

First of I would like to say I love your story very much I just like how you get it to flow so nicely with the characters and even though you changed how Kagome and some of the characters are in this story it just fits. I had started to read it before I don't know how long ago it was but had seen you had recently updated it so I decided to read it from the beginning again and loved it even more. My little bit of critism is that I was wondering when Kagome would get to go home and see her mom and we would find out who the dark man from her nightmares on the island is I wasn't sure if you remembered that or not cause you have been pretty into the whole story so far with her at Sesshomaru's home and she hasn't even asked once about going to see her mom.Also, I have seen a bit or grammar errors here and there nothing real serious but some misspelled words and I don't know if you have one or even want one but I wouldn't mind betaing if you ever wanted me to I am a stay at home mom with some time on my hands here and there just let me know.
Thanks for reading this.
Briana

I love this story and I'm really glad I found that it had been updated again. I just wish this site sent out email chapter updates so I could read them as soon as they are posted. This was a long chapter and I really loved it. I'm a bit confused about somethings- like how the story has had very little content about 'Sessh & Kagome' since they arrived at his home. When they were on the island Kagome was having something like visions(?)& when they left the island in Ch.13 Erika the tennyo explained to them that(cut & paste) Kagome had a hidden power within her that she was unaware of & that she was never a normal human."(&) that she had enhanced abilities. While you were in your mother's womb the kami gifted you with several gifts.The majority of these gifts,however,would not manifest themselves until you met Sesshoumaru and mixed his blood with yours. This activated the rest of your latent abilities; you will slowly discover what those abilities are as time moves on. Your senses, strength, stamina and speed are even greater than they were before,but that is only the tip of the anthill so to speak, but that is for you to figure out on your own my dear. Kagome to be honest I have no idea what to classify you as, you are no longer human,but not a demon,nor are a hanyo ..Hmmm, maybe a type of tennyo? That sounds as good as anything at this point." (&) Ericka told Kagome-your body now requires that you ingest blood on a regular basis. While you are pregnant,your body will require an even greater amount of blood to keep both you and the pup healthy. When the pup is born you will not require as great an amount, but you will be required to feed on blood regularly to keep your health and strength up; much like a demon does. Your child will not be a half breed, since Kagome was 'technically' not human when she became pregnant, it will be something greater because Kagome had a this hidden power within her & was never a normal human."
Since Erika said that her latent abilities from the kamis had been activated by Sessh's blood & that her enhanced senses,speed & strength-were just the tip of the anthill & Kagome would figure out the rest of them on her own.(To me it seemed to imply that if her enhanced senses & such were just the tip of the anthill then Kagome would start manifesting some major powers & abilities but there has been no info in the story of Kagome's enhanced senses or anything else.) I'm kind of bummed because I've been looking forward to finding out what Kagome is becoming & what her new abilities & powers would be. (will she be able to fly,use elements, have visions, use majic or what? Ericka said she may be some type of tennyo but there's been absolutely no changes to Kagome (not even mentions of her enhanced senses?)
It seemed Kagome was the only being of her kind &/or she'd be changing into a new & powerful being that never existed before?) There's also been no mention of the man that is after Kagome & the reason she can't see her family. I've been dying to find out what new powers & abilities Kagome would get & now that she also received blood Ikaru I'm curios if that will have any effect on Kagome? I'm also dying to know if Kagome will be able to understand howls,barks & yips (so she could communicate with her pups?)? I'm also curious if Erika will be continuing to visit her, guide her & inform her of stuff- either about her family,the scary man that is after her or about any changes Kagome will be going through. It also seemed odd that all these powerful demons (or demons of royal blood) didn't care or even take any notice of Kagome & as she's neither a human or demon but something altogether uique,,I thought the demons would be curious of her scent,aura or etc. I'm sorry this review was so long & confusing but I just got a new PC & I can't work it very well & every time I try to type, delete or edit...I lose everything I'm writing.)& sometimes the page just dissappears. Well I'll leave it here & just say that I can't wait to read more & find out what happens next.

i love this story i hope that you update soon

I've only read up to chapter 5 and i gotta say im ADDICTED!! i cant stop reading:) please update soon cause after tonight i'll be done reading the remainder chapters :)

I love this story & I enjoyed this new chapter but I have a few thoughts & questions. I feel uncomfortable mentioning them in a review but as I can't leave a PM,this is my only choice. When they were on the island we learned from Ericka that Kagome was born human but she's special,different than any other human and that the gods changed her and gave her special gifts when she was in her mom's womb. She told Kagome the reason she always felt different was because she was different,she was made for Sessh (or they were made for each other) and that she gave off an aura that made her seem unattractive to any male other than Sessh and once she's mated to Sessh the magic in her blood will become active and change her. She'll become something else and she'll get stronger(I can't wait to see how much stronger since she can already wear 350-400lbs of armor where Sessh, a powerful youkai,can only wear 150lbs of armor & I can't wait to see how Ikaru and Sessh's dad/family react when they see how heavy her armor is since Sessh was shocked),faster and gain special powers and abilities,along with other changes. When she and Sessh started getting closer she started to have dreams that after Ericka looked into them it turned out they were more like visions but other than that & only then,she never had them again and only when Rin was in trouble did Kagome become so fast that Sessh said he couldn't follow her scent because she was moving so quickly that she wasn't touching the ground. One of the gifts the gods gave her was the ability to birth full blooded youkai and then we learned from Ericka that Kagome would have to drink blood for the rest of her life but not as often as when she's pregnant. I know Kagome told Ikaru and Sessh's dad everything from her fight with Sessh, to the Tennyo showing up & sending them to the island, to the fact that she's now his mate and carrying his child and that according to the Ericka..Kagome and Sessh being mated was the will of the gods but since Sessh has been knocked out since they arrived,I was wondering if Kagome told them everything,like; she's no longer human but something similar to a Tennyo,she can birth full blooded youkai but they'll be very powerful because they'll also inherit some of the gifts that the gods gave her. I was also wondering when she'll start changing and we'll find out what her new powers and abilities will be. I also don't understand why Kagome isn't even curious or interested in what/how she'll be changing or what powers and abilities she'll be getting because it's like she doesn't care and that just seems bizarre(You feel different,like an outsider from your family and everyone around you for your entire life ,then you suddenly find out why, along with the fact that you'll be changing, getting powers and abilitiies...& you show no interest?.Plus, you have a life changing battle coming up and you aren't even interested in training or finding out if you have gotten any of your new abilities?).I can't wait for the next chapter,the battle,Sessh's waking (Oh yeah,why hasn't Kagome mentioned that she & Sessh have a spell on them where they feel each others pain,get each others injuries and so forth?)..I also wonder how many pups Kagome will have?

I have so many questions that I can't wait to read more of this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.