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for Kiss and Control

by Kijo52

schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you intended the brickbat, you know you did cuz it was fun to do to us. lol and i've a feeling that we had all better prepare ourselves for more in the future!
person wale64
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool story I like it please update soon
person freelke
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, I look forward to where it is headed. I can;t wait for the next chapter. Please update again soon
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you like to sneak up on your readers and then belt them with a brickbat, don't you? i really need you to get the next chapter up so i can take a breath again.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! best freaking story ever. update soon! PLEASE!
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am hookes. please write some more soon.
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, i'm hooked. i want to see how this works out. it sounds like it's going to be really good.