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for Cold Case

by twilight313

person Diane
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I never thought this was going to get a 2nd chapter since it's been years since it's been updated. Hope you manage to finish it before we've all dead.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds like it will be good, update soon
person ladyryuk
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I love cold case,inuyasha, and YYH. It will be interesting to see them put together
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had read this story once before, not quite sure if i reviewed. I really hope that you update with another chapter soon. i like the way it's beginning to play out. any who. i wait patiently for another chapter.

I.S.
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg u killed kagome. o i bet it was hojo. anyhow very interesting story. im looking forward to reading more of it.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far & am looking forward to the next part whenever you get it out I do have some commentary from a CourtTV Forensic Files & other such shows nut since the timing is off according to shows like that, the 1st 72 hours seem to be the critical time in an investigation, if it’s not solved by the end of that time it’s likely to go cold, they seem to keep the cases active for at least several months if not a couple of years before putting it in the cold case files though so it being put there in only a few weeks is rather unrealistic, they’d still be working on it. Also just as a FYI, you have be able to in the summary 1 time too many & it’s peace not piece, the way it is now is like a piece of candy or something instead of peace of mind. It would be better like this instead of as it is now; Summary: Her murder had gone unsolved for too long. He only hoped that Shuichi and his squad would finally be able to provide him some peace of mind. Hope this helps.
person lukymiko
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting...
person madmiko
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee! I really like the idea. (But then again, I love a good mystery! *wink*) But, it's going to be sad, no matter what, because she's already dead. *sigh* And I do so love a happy ending.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It leaves an air of sadness and mystery. Looking forward to the next chapter.