rate_review Reviews

I know I read the first few chapters of this awhile ago...and I have no idea why I didn't review then. I love -LOVE!- this story. I love that Kagome and Inuyasha don't immediately hook up. I love, especially, how you've written Kouga -I get tired of him being a snotty asshole to everyone, and that whole "My woman" stuff all the time gets irritating too. I like how affectionate he is toward Kagome, but you keep him in-character with his attitude toward Inuyasha. I have to say that this is the most interesting version of him I have ever read.

I don't think you should worry about Inuayasha being OOC. For one, since this is an AU story and he's older, I think exploring the differences in his attitude and responses to things is a necessity. I think he cusses just enough and still has enough of that stubborn I-don't-give-a-shit attitude to make him who he is.

I can't really think of any con-crit to give you other than minor spelling/grammatical mistakes -all of which could be fixed with a good round of editing. I was nearly in tears when Kagome found out her brother was dead, and was just as mad as she was at Inuyasha's description of her as "nothing special" (what a jerk!!). And I think I was holding my breath when she and Kouga kissed at the end of the last chapter. For whatever reason, even though I'm a die-hard Inu/Kag fan, that didn't upset me. It just seemed so natural that it should happen.

It's been awhile since I've read an Inuyasha fanfic that I'm completely enthralled with. I can't wait to see where you take this story.

I like so far please continue writting this story.

very nice update.

Don't worry everyone, it's just a plot twist. You'll be happy next chapter Stella, just you wait.

how dare you make me cry! *sniff, sniff* please update, you made me sad. and i really like this fic. please? good fic. love the coinsidences with peoples. still... so sad.

this is really good..
I hope you're still continuing it.

Very interesting twist, souta dying. You're doing a great job, I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

poor kagome. its about time she found out inuyasha was her next door nabour, lol.
cant wait for the next chapter.
plz update soon :)
thank you

this update was so good.
poor Souta though :(
can't wait for you next chapter

Hey! Nice job with this story! It is certainly one of a kind that's for sure! Haha, Kagome was so close to finding out that Inuyasha and the guy from the cafe are one in the same! Keepin us on edge eh? Well, i can't wait to see what happens in the story next, so keep up the good work! Until next time!