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More!! :) i love this story!! i can't wait til i read even more!!

Kikyo sure seems nosy about Sango and Miroku's relationship for someone who is never around much for Inuyasha and I doubt she is going to stick around. Poor Inuyasha is going to get his heart broken.
I also like that Kagome is being one with her inner demon. That is pretty cool and I wonder if she can control all three parts of herself. The demon, the priestess, and her human self.
Sesshoumaru seems to be interested in Kagome for some reason which still bothers me a bit since it is like he wants to use Kagome to get to his little brother. Still, I love him. Sesshoumaru is so handsome and sexy that it is no wonder her demon seems to want him. I just wonder if Kagome will break through before it is too late to stop her demon from obtaining the relic if Sesshoumaru even has one. He could be just fucking with her.

Why does Sesshoumaru want Kagome to bring him his brother when he can get Inuyasha any time he wants to? Seems odd to me. Still, very interesting chapter I hope to read more.

I like this very much, just not sure on how to receive update notices. Anyways, other than a few minor grammatical errors, love the story. Keep it up! ;)

I love this story. I hope to read more chapters as you continue on. I also love that Kagome is an artist in this story. If you can, please e mail me when you do an update. My e mail addresss is vyperbites@yahoo.com.

I'm so glad you've decided to update this story -- it put it on the top of the page, where I found it. I think the flow of the story is going well, and so is your dialogue, but in a couple of the earlier chapters, I found it hard to trace the breaks in the narrative and switches to other people. Other than that, I think the premise is good and it has a lot of potential.

Kat -- weyrdkat@msn.com

Great story.. I really hope to see more...

Hurray!

I mean, that you updated, of course...not really hurray about what happened in this chapter because that was all very sad. I was happy to see Inuyasha wanting to make amends for his shitty comment (and that Kagome called him out on it). Although, I wanted to shake him when he was thinking maybe he should be trying to put things right with Kikyo instead of Kagome. But all that with Koga's mother...I may have teared up just a little. Like I said before, I'm usually not a Koga fan, but he was trying to be so nice and then his mother just has to come and mess everything up. And poor Kags...sheesh. Girl just can't catch a break.

Great chapter, chock-full of emotion. Although I've liked the way you've written Kagome and Koga together, I'm looking forward to more Inu/Kags interaction! I'll be looking forward to your next update!

~cu-kid

Gosh! Finally got up to date on this and I have to say, it's a compelling AU. I'm feeling with the characters as they go, and you appear to have given more thought to the social and political order than some writers who do a modern human/demon AU.

I look forward to more. Thank you.

good story, interesting characterizations and you've revealed a lot... at least as much as the characters know. kagome's premonitions and insights manifested in her art and nightmares and what it all means. what kikyo's up to and what she's planning with yash. if kagome's parents' and brother's deaths are related and the whole mystery surrounding them.

captivating and enthralling.

thank you,
ginny