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February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru kissing in general is so hot! I so love him! Anyway, poor Kagome and poor Koga. I want Koga to be happy too, but I think it is best he finds a demon girlfriend or has his Mother already set him up with one? That would be good too. I just would like to see Inuyasha and Kagome get together so much. Kikyo is such a bitch and Inuyasha deserves better.
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahh :D yeahh
new chapter.
impatiently awaiting your next installment
new chapter.
impatiently awaiting your next installment
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January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I kind of hope that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha will get along since I think Sesshoumaru has feelings for Kagome's demon. It would be nice for the demon Lord to have someone to come home to besides Rin as cute as she is. Then again I like him as a bachelor since he is so hot and sexy making me want him for myself lol. Anyway, I just want to tell you how much I love this story. I am so glad you are still writing it since I enjoy it so very much. Thank you and I look forward to the next chapter!
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, the character development is great.
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January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and cannot wait for more. It is a refreshing way to see the characters....
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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay! :D
i check back regularly to see if you've updated
yay for surprises!
i hope kinky-ho falls offa cliff :(
anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
Until we meet again,
Serene
i check back regularly to see if you've updated
yay for surprises!
i hope kinky-ho falls offa cliff :(
anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
Until we meet again,
Serene
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if there is going to be romance between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Thing is I think Inuyasha would break that up pretty quickly. I would like to see a bit of a love triangle here besides the one with Kouga.
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January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY!:)
i can't wait for more
impatiently waiting....
Serene
i can't wait for more
impatiently waiting....
Serene
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In some ways I wish Miroku wouldn't have found Kouga again. Kagome is better off without Kouga in her life.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This really is an excellent story you have. Great ideas, terrific pacing and a dynamite character development in place. My one knock is that I would suggest getting an editor. There have been several technical errors such as misspelling or using the wrong word in certain places. Although maybe you already have gotten one because chapter 21 lacked all those errors that I noticed previously. From chapter 1 to now is night and day. Your writing has progressed swimmingly. I can't wait until your next chapter. Keep up the good work.