rate_review Reviews

Ohayo! I like your story! umm just a few things that I noticed though.
Koibito- is used by females for their males
Anata- it the same thing as koibito

Koishi- I believe is what you meant. Since it was Kurama calling Kagome Koibito, which should have been Koishi
aisai- is also what should replace anata.

just thought I'd help, I really do like your one shot though!
Ja Ne
Infinite Silence

I really like this, I've read it 3 times already. 1 thing though there seem to be missing words here & there starting in the 1st paragraph you have pre-lit Christmas & no tree after. Hope this helps & I'm looking forward to reading whatever you do next.

what a great oneshot!!!! you should continue to do more oneshots like these ^_~ by the way, I really liked that last sentance hehe, it sure adds a touch to it

Cute! The bra on the tree was a great touch!

Great one-shot! I'm a real lover of Kagome/Kurama! It was well written too. Hoping to read from you again,and Merry Christmas!