errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I WILL BE YOUR BESTEST FRIEND IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD IF YOU KEEP UPDATING!!!!....THIS STORY HAS ME ON MY TOES. I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP. UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
schedule
January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Kagome is CSI?! And here I was thinking she's just a house-wife in the story. Heehee...
I'm so glad you brought in all the other main characters like Sango and Miroku. When the latter showed up, I was waiting for him to crack his usual pick-up line, and he didn't disappoint. LOL!!! IMO, I think that you've kept everyone in character...that's hard to do, hats off to you! *HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!*
I'm so glad you brought in all the other main characters like Sango and Miroku. When the latter showed up, I was waiting for him to crack his usual pick-up line, and he didn't disappoint. LOL!!! IMO, I think that you've kept everyone in character...that's hard to do, hats off to you! *HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!*
schedule
January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please!!!!!... Did Sesshomaru really think that Rin was going to stay at his house?!?! The next chapter should be really good....Happy New Year!!!!! ;)
schedule
January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great. At first i thougth the plot was acceptable, but then a read the chapters and, i have to say, your plot is very very good (the policial part is great). And you update fast too!
I will keep reading your stories.
I will keep reading your stories.
schedule
December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are getting close to the killer. I hope that Rin and Kagome are not way over their heads. Happy New Year and update soon.
schedule
December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! I could feel the tension and anxiety of Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha and Taisho. (Only saw one apostrophe typo, no biggie.)
Happy New Year! I'm looking forward to the next installment. ^_^
Happy New Year! I'm looking forward to the next installment. ^_^
schedule
December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter! The conference room scene was intense!
I did notice a word usage issue in the scene with Inuyasha and Kagome. It said, "Her body shuddered under his menstruations and she could feel him smirk against her neck as her head lulled to the side involuntarily." The "menstruations" in the sentence refers to that time of the month, which I don't think you meant. I think you might have wanted "minstrations" instead (I think that's how it's spelled ^_^).
Happily awaiting Chapter 8 . . .
I did notice a word usage issue in the scene with Inuyasha and Kagome. It said, "Her body shuddered under his menstruations and she could feel him smirk against her neck as her head lulled to the side involuntarily." The "menstruations" in the sentence refers to that time of the month, which I don't think you meant. I think you might have wanted "minstrations" instead (I think that's how it's spelled ^_^).
Happily awaiting Chapter 8 . . .
schedule
December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh The freaking suspense is killin me! U better update SOON! *pretty please* It seems 2 me that Rin is in more good graces w/ Inu Taisho than Kagome despite Rin being separated w/ them 4 a long period of time and Kagome just the oppposite. Do I sense favoritism of daughter in law here hmm..? Again, pls. update SOON!
schedule
December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see Sesshoumaru and Rin alone for a few hours talking or whatever but I think they need some time to talk about things that have happened.
schedule
December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kikyo, her death was brutal. I hope that she has given enough information to Inuyasha to help find the killer. Update soon