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Cliffhangers aren't fun! Wow, all I can say is, that was intense but at least now Sesshomaru knows what happened to Rin in the past. Hopefully it'll bring them close together. I love this pairing. Can't wait till the next update. KEEP WRITING!

Waiting for the lemon!!! :)))

omg an update yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story sooo much i gots to see the next chappy....please update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I enjoy your story the more you update it. I am glad that you did not give up on this story even though you do not get as much review as you should. I can not wait until you update again. On a better note, I hope that when Rin and Sess do the deed that it will not hurt Rin. I think them being together is way to soon for Rin. She need to handle what has happen to her and to just get to know Sesshoumaru again. I hope nothing happens to Kagome either in this fic. Kouga better stay alive. Maybe he can rescue Kagura and they can get together. Update soon.

I am really feeling this so far. Rin, detective... I like it.

Oh my. This was a very well-written chapter, very fast-paced and intense. I was actually in shock reading some parts. I truly feel badly for the little girl, even though she was a fictional character. I say anyone who does something like that to a kid should be . . . well, very, very, VERY bad things should happen to them---things that results in a horrible, gruesome death. (Sorry, I have very strong opinions about this.)

I only noticed one spelling mistake ("fieces" should be "feces"), nothing major.

Good luck with the next chapter. Hope to read it soon!

Wow! That was a really intense chap 9! Poor Kouga.
Questions: So is Rin's father related to Naraku? Are they brothers? And just to be clear, Rin is human, right?

*sheds a few tears for kouga* he was hot and annoying all at the same time. he will be missed. i hope sesshomaru kicks some major ass...poor rin and poor kagome. rin's father and naraku need to die asap....get em sesshy. update soon please.

Oh man!!!! I knew some stuff so going to happen, but...OH MAN!!!!!! Kouga dead!!! Rin is so going to blame herself for that!!! This chapter was action packed!!!! I only hope that Rin will be able to tell Sesshomaru what happen in her childhood!!!!! Keep it coming!!!!

I knew Rin's father was involved with the little girls killing. But I do not know what his relationship with Naraku. Is Rin's father Narakus's father? Why did you had to kill Kouga. Why could you find a nice girl for him instead of kiling him? Update soon.