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I luv ur story!!! It has become one of my favorites. For the poll that u have up i say that yes kagome should be with both of the sesshomarus.

OOHHHHH! GOOD chapter! I am so thankful that you updates! I love this story you have no idea! I hope my opinion was helpful to you! well, Back to your great work!

Nice addition. It seems that Lord Sesshomaru is being forced to see himself in a new light by Sesshomaru's suddenly cold and indifferent behavior. He might not like what he sees. Hopefully, though, Sesshomaru will see that this is not what Kagome needs from him. Okay, about your poll. If I had my choice, OF COURSE I would love to have a Sesshomaru double entre. Hell, who wouldn't? What's better than one Sesshomaru? TWO! Not only do we get the stoic surly demon we are used to, but we also get a delicious new version full of potential, caring and--dare I say it?--FUN. BUT this is your story and while I occasionally incorporate a slight change or addition into my stories to suit the readers, something of this nature would drastically alter the outcome of the planned plot. If you have pre-planned the story, then this could mean re-thinking and re-planning the remaining chapters. Now, if you did not have them planned to begin with, I suppose that it would not matter. Unfortunately, writing a story without planning ahead can lead to disaster, so if this is the case, be careful of your details. I guess ultimately it is up to you. You are the author and it will be you that decides the outcome. I'm always up for a Sesshy sandwich, but if you decide to stick with your plans leaving Kagome with only one, then it is fine by me. Thanks for the read.

Rin

I vote Kagome gets both of them :D Great job with the story, love the plot, i like how Sesshomaru is making Lord S. show his feelings :> *starts singing 'feelings, wo wo wo feelings' from Buffy the Vampire Slayer* lol

wow i cant wait it is really good and i so want to read more plaese update soon TTFN

Wow... You already got another chapter out. Interesting dynamics. Can't wait to see the next one.

Take care!

oh yi, nothing worse than having someone hold a mirror up for you. this story just gets better and better.

Why must males draw the worst conclusion? I mean really, how hard is it to pull someone aside and ask a few simple questions to clear things up? But then again Im not a guy, nore do i have their whole Male Pride thing goin. And plus it wouldnt be a story without some drama. Great job on this chapter :) The guys are like switching roles now, how funny, they both want to be like each other for Kagome. Can't wait for the next update, much love to you for writing :D

Very nice. The story is getting better and better... when will Kagura show again, what will Naraku do, I know I know answering those questions would ruin the surprise...

lol, Crazy confused dog demons. One doesn't recognise jealousy and the other thinks that she wants cold and cruel. Welp, can't wait to see how they're conversation goes. ^.^ Update soon!