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for A Simple Kind Of Life

by mikodawn

schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... when you say Inuyasha and Naraku, do you mean Inuyasha AND Naraku? hehe. I know, that is very hentai of me. Bad Rinseternalsoul! Seriously though, getting kissed by 2 Sesshomaru's has got to be the hottest thing ever. It just bumped up my fantasy collection by the dozens. Please don't be angry with me, but I hope that you can avoid having Kagome call someone a 'cunt' again. It was pretty ooc for her. Try to keep the character in mind even in emotional moments. Just a little unsolicited advice that may help you. We are enjoying your story very much. Again, thanks for the read.

Rin
person 4inukag4
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW I have to tell you this is getting DAMN good DAMN fast. I love it and PLEASE keep this up.

Holly S
You can't roller skate in a buffalo herd.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story so far!
person Amadoni
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is an very interesting story. I have to give you props for creativity. I patiently await your next update. ja na
person Risa
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, very nice and enjoyable chapter. The kiss was passionate. I like it.
I apologize if someone else posed this thought,but if there is a Sesshoumaru in the other world, wouldn't there be another Kagome?
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If i was Kagome i think i would promptly have a heart attack. Image 2 Sessy's talking about mating you if that is not heart attack worthy i dont know what is! Great story!!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! TWO updates in one day!!!!!!!! Thank you for your quick writing, and very good chapter too!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*swats at Kagura* She be getting in the way of my mental imaging. XD Cool, a new person to the group. ^.^ Can't wait to see how the trio decide the mating rituals. ^_^ Update soon!
person Crysan
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOO Naraku and Kagura spells BIG Trouble. Can't wait to see how the talk on mating will go it should be funny!
person cocoke5
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol the last part of the chapter when they take a brake. and sessshurmaru say to lord sesshurmaru i an try ing to act like you. that was funny to m e. and i love the story and can not wait for thenext chapter. up date soon

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