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i really love this story. i giggle like a fool everytime i see you've updated. there's a whole lotta giggling going round.

ok so in love with this story i really want more please keep up the great work please update soon TTFN

Nice update I really do like your story please update again soon!

Have to say, when I was reading the first half of the chapter, the words "She couldn't have said she had plans for Inuyasha and just kill him, could she?" Much thanks on not making me wait to know that Inu was still alive, lol. ^^;

And good call on Maru deciding to explain things to Kagome. o.O

Though I have to wonder is Naraku really purified? oO I thought he wasn't, but I could have misread, lol.

Anyway, great chapter! Had me scared at first, but it's all good now, lol. ^^ Update soon!

? i am not trying to step on your toes here, but i s0o0o0o had this idea for a sequel to this, and i would love to write it but wont unless i get your okay, oddly i have an idea for a sequel to that sequel,... i'm so in love with this story, i've never wanted to write because of someone else's fanfic, until yours that is. here's my FF.net acct if you want to see my style b4 you say anything, http://www.fanfiction.net/~sugar0o thanks!!!! please let me know. thanks!

i was wondering how that was going to go, i think it was wonderful b/c i know lemons aren't easy to write as they are to read, constructively my only complaint was that it wasn't longer, with more teasing for the reader, it was very to the point and well i liked it, i ain't complainin'!!! i was also wondering who was going to 'pup' her first? and how would they know until the 'pup' was born? I mean i think Lord Sess should because he's got lands and needs an hier, while Maru just loves her, he's not in need of 'pup's as soon. as for why i ask how would they know, well if they are both supposed to be something akin to 'Genetically perfect match' how would they know? O_o

yay! new chapter!

..............i don't believe it....... this makes kagome look like a slut! i would have maru die and then have her have a relationship with lord sesshomaru.... ah i liked the story but her end up with both of them...

The length of the chapter is all good. ^_^ Dedicated to a turn in Kagome's life, though I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^ What with the other lords coming, and Inuyasha's going to see a second Kagome and Kikyo. Only this time those two are sisters, cute twist by the way. ^_^ Update soon!

don't worry girl, you did good. it was a very good lemon. just a few technical mistakes. i love this story, it is soooo good! i can't wait to see how inuyasha comes out.