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Great Chap. I loved it. I think it was Kagura” who did it.

AHHH!!!! YOU CANNOT END IT THERE!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!! PLEASE!!

Could it have been Kagura? That would be my guess. LOL She really wants a home, and desperate people will do things that they would not normally do to take care of themselves.

Intriguing story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

you pull wings off of flies, don't you? Ending like that was just wicked! As to who the killer is, i think it's kagura. either her or the princess' father. the girl had absolutely no respect for her killer. she wouldn't respect the female willing to be her father's concubine and, as spoiled as she was, i doubt she respected her father. her father's motive would be a peaceful home without his spoiled snot of a daughter whinning around. kagura would want to make sure that kagome would live so tora would go through with the deal. then again, it could have been me because i dislike whinny, demanding spoiled brats. sure murder is a bit extreme, but the brat never bothers you again.

serious time now. you are forgetting periods at the ends of sentences and you have an awful lot of sentence fragments. picky picky picky.

i am so totally into this story and i can't wait to see how you end it. are you bringing inuyasha and/or naraku back? it sounds like you put them into better worlds for themselves. i have to cackle everytime i think of inuyasha with the miko sisters. heh heh heh

This is a very unique story. So far from what I have read, its one of a kind. Great plot, the only thing that I would say that you should watch out for is spelling and your skill at missing words. They are not important words, but I know people who read fan fics. Very picky people when it comes down to grammar. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next post.

i so love this story, i just get happy as can be reading it ^_^ can't wait for the next update!

more! more! this was a great one! why is Maru angry?

Very nice updates! I am proud of you...

Very nice, i cant wait to see the fight

Hehehe, this chapter had me cracking up. Kagome and her dirty mind, and poor Sesshomaru, already having to defend himself against any thoughts of Koga joining. ^^;; Curious as to how it will turn out. And niiiiice catch on Naraku finding Naraku. ^^ Update soon!