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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, nice proposal for Kagome. ^^;; I kind of like that whole line of thinking, then both Sesshomaru's get what they want and she probably will get what she wants also. Though a little competition at first never hurt anybody. And poor Totosai, lol. He's olde and crazy, and Inuyasha just comes at him from left field with the Sesshomaru bit.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story. I was browsing and thought it sounded interesting. The plot is very unique. You should get a beta to help with your spelling, grammer and typos. *sigh* I had to get one too. It really helps. Since the story has such a cute twist I think that the extra effort would really make it great. Good luck with it from here. I'll be checking back periodically to see how you are doing.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, you HAVE to keep writing the story, it is soooo good! and i'm still laughing over totsai putting inuyasha in his place. sometimes blunt honesty is so delicious!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice Update I really do look forward to more!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!!! please update!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story so far. I have never read anything like it and im looking forward to later chapters. Having one sesshomaru is great but having two....now im in heaven.keep up the good work.
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story line... raises a few questions, Does Sesshy break them up, Why does he want to, and Does Inu really Die after Naraku is killed?
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww....I like this story! Such an interesting plot, I have to say, I've never seen this done. Will she end up choosing Sesshomaru? Or Lord Sesshomaru? Or will there end up being a co-mating of sorts where she ends up with both? Update soon!