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oh, you gave me a scare...i thought for sure that your a/n was going to be something to the effect that you were putting all your stories on hiatus. what a relief!

hey, i'm not listed as a beta, but i like your storytelling and i've got very strong English language skills, if you'd like, i'd be happy to beta your work. if you're up for it, my email is rowdyjaner@yahoo.com.

janer

Ok, first, on the Inuyasha bit: Sweet deal. Glad there's a game plan for him. ^_^

For the poll: I'm loving the idea of her getting both Sesshomarus. For a couple of reasons. Sesshomaru has gone through so much and it was implied that he already lost a love and his child to his world, so since he's already got a big thing for Kagome, let him have her, lol. For Lord Sesshomaru, it was also implied that he fancied our little miko as well, and being the lonely bugger that he is, it'd only be nice. I'm sure Kagome could handle them both. ^^ And Rin and Shippo would have each other.

So in short, after the uber long speech, I vote for her getting both.

No she should choose it creates more drama for her to have to choose...

I think that it is your story and you should do what you want. BUt if you want my opinion I think that she should end up with Sesshoumaru, but Lord Sesshoumaru should have Maru(sesshoumaru) as his brother and Lord Sesshoumaru being in the same pack can share. But what ever you decide I will be a dedicated reader.

You have one of THE best stories i've read all year. I personally vote for the DoubleSesshoumaru/Kagome pairing. I love both of their personalities and think they are both just what Kagome needs. Also...it's hot! Plus i'm a little selfish thinking that rivalry and bouts of jellousy will make the story go on longer and since I love your writting i'm hoping this one will last. Thus my vote is for LordSesshoumaru/Kagome/Seshoumaru threesome pairing.

~Ja ne! ^.~

wow i really like this story. fantastic job thus far ^_^

This is a pretty engaging fic! Two Sesshoumarus...that'll keep my interest any day! I like how you compare the characters' individual experiences with their motivations, i.e. Sesshoumaru was treated ill by humans but still acts submissive and caring in most instances, while Lord Sesshoumaru had a relatively easy life with no true ill treatment by humans and yet he dismisses them. I really like that you allow your characters to have flaws that are slowly maturing during your story. I can't wait to read more! Especially about a Sesshoumaru all in black...drool....

That is probably a cute picture of an incredably abnormal dog demon family. ^^ Still feel bad for Inuyasha, lol. ^^;

Oh my god...this story keeps getting better and better! write more!

Dawna Sama

very good, keep up the good work and update so I can read this wonderful story! see ya!

Dawna Sama