rate_review Reviews

Hey, I am really enjoying this story. I see that you are taking a poll.
Well, Kagome rescued Sesshoumaru because she believed he was Lord Sesshoumaru; therefore, she really is attracted to Lord Sesshoumaru
SESSHOUMARU:
Sesshoumaru's mannerisms emulate how humans behave, and Kagome is enjoying the difference.
Sesshoumaru is grateful for receiving his freedom, friendship and more. Things he was denied.
LORD SESSHOUMARU:
Lord Sesshoumaru quietly harbored feelings for Kagome and went through the length by secretly going to the well. He waited and hope for her return. Kagome understands Lord Sesshoumaru's reasons behind his personality.
CONCLUSION AND DECISION
I think Lord Sesshoumaru and Kagome should wind up together, and Sesshoumaru should find someone else, like Inuyasha.
It was an important factor, for me, when Lord Sesshoumaru told Kagome that he needed her; she was TRULY overjoyed by it. It's all Kagome ever wanted was to feel wanted.
I hope I made sense, and I hope you will continue with this very interesting story.

So far I like the story. However, I think there
needs to be some editting. There are words and
sentences that do not make sense... I'll continue
reading it! I think the entire two Sesshamaru
thing is clever. I have yet to read a story like
this one, so keep it up!

yes i would like her to end up with both Sess's....... And now for my review i realy like this story. I can't wait till you update again and i hope that it is soon.

I've been interested in the whole psychological point that Kagome has had to experience from this. I've been enjoying this story a lot. It is different and refreshing (I've yet to read Rinseternalsoul's The Portal, but I plan to when I have enough extra time while avoiding writing my semester finals for my class. LOL). I can't help but wonder what it would be like for her to deal with two Sesshomarus, so I have to vote for that just because it is a novel idea.

I just have some trouble reconsiling Lord Sesshomaru as subservient to Kagome, but it could get interesting. I also think it could be pretty interesting to see him take Sesshomaru aside and talk him into trying to dominate Kagome. LOL There are a lot of interesting things you could play with until you decide what is best for your fic. It is your world ultimately, and you get this golden opportunity to be the ultimate.

Enjoy and have great holidays.

Can't wait for another chapter. Sorry if I have neglected to review, but I am the slightly nutty high school English teacher! Everything slips my mind by the time I get home.

Just to remind you or let you know if you are not too used to dealing with dogs: Dogs trained to fight or protect are very aggressive and don't fit continuously into the role of a submissive dog. Quite often, they do tend to turn.

Been around enough mistreated large dogs to know that one! (Never been hurt from one yet. One of my best dogs was one that had been starved and abandoned. Once she realized that she was safe~and I do thank my lucky stars that she was smart enough to figure it~she was very tender and sweet. But, she would get upset with somebody messing with one of ours around here)

Just figured it was some info you might could use if you did not have it since it seemed relevent from the title.

Take care!

One Sesshomaru is good, two Sesshomaru's are better.

i think she should be with both, that would be totally awesome!!

Yes, I like the idea of her ending up with both of them. However, unless 'Sesshoumaru' starts to go by a different name (i.e. Sesshou) the story could become very confusing, not to mention what the 'youkai court' will think when Lord Sesshoumaru introduces Sesshoumaru. The court will think InuTaisho was off his rocker. I also think that it might be helpful/fun if Kagome came up with nicknames for each Sesshoumaru later on in the story. I do hope you'll update soon. Keep up the great work!!!

Since you said you were having a poll, I vote that yes she have both of them. I like how the story is shaping up so far, it's very enjoyable.

i won't lie i saw this update and got my hopes up. not that their dashed just a little let down. I really wanted another chapter. As for your poll, i don;t think it'd be fair for one to get her while the other doesn't, Sesshomaru deserves her but then Lord Sessh has probably wanted her for far longer. The way you positioned them all in the last chapter leads me to say that i think some how she should have both. OR if thats not possible, she should find a second Kags, you did bring up detentions!. ^_^ though no matter what and who ends up with who if both live and end up @ the western palace, or something i think Sesshomaru should get a different name, nickname or not, I agree with one of your reviews having one son named "Killing perfection" is one thing, having a second son named the same thing... would be crazy. if you could find the meanings to the word to make the name something like "Honorable Slayer" or "Fearsome protector" those would be cool. ^_^