rate_review Reviews

I feel like I'm in a doublemint commercial only it's in anime. This story is beyond wonderful. Two Sesshomaru's...I could die, oh the problems and fun little plot twists this could bring up. I'm not entirely sure if I'd want to be Kagome right now. I about doubled over when I read the section where Maru and Sessho played pass-the-Kagome. Just wait till Inuyasha shows up, or Kouga! *that did it, doubles over with laughter*

I liked this story. It seemed a little rushed in the end, but then again... this story could have turned into the never-ending variety. I liked your sess-kags-sess story....it was very unique. I liked how you set things up. But the only adjustment I could offer would be to space your timing. Things got confusing a couple of times. And use a lot of scene description. Add some body to your stories. You are really good at concepts. Some things in this story I have never seen before...
Good on you!(this is a compliment)
InuPriestess

o my dear god woman! A Sesshomaru, a Maru and a Sess? she's going to be so damned oversexed she wont be able to walk right. hahahaha jebus poor kags, and Sesshomaru's feeling really bad about not being the only one in her life, now there's 3 of them. I honestly have to say though that she's running out of places to put them *naughty thoughts* lmao, i do also have to say she probably can't accommodate any more of them.

And isn't there a Kags out there somewhere that is missing a Sesshomaru of some kind? i mean, Real-Kags has taken Moon-Sess, Sun-Sess, and Playful-Sess? where as Inu has Playful-kags and playful-Kikyo, and Moon-Kikyo was really the Kags of that world, that leaves me to wonder where Sun-Kags is, and where the Sess of real-Kags world is.... i'm sure if anyone can understand that, its you.

either way i'm honestly in love with your story, its horribly inventive. and it makes me smile just to read it, you've done a damn good job with this story thus far... but what abotu all the Naraku's? Real Kags killed Sun-Naraku, Moon-Naraku got sent to Playful-Naraku's world, and Sun-Naraku is a good guy? *head hurts*

Yes that was worth the wait. I have been enjoying this story from the beginning to now. I am looking forward to your next update.

Well aint you a freaky-deak kind of person!
I love it!

Now that was very amusing. They just kind of run into each other. LOL I hope you feel better soon. If you are still feeling congested, and coughing, try slathering vicks vapor rub on the soles of your feet and putting socks over them before you go to bed. It may sound weird, but it works for the coughing.

*makes soup and tea and cool compresses and asprin* No no no that won't do .. you must get better* Tucks in bed* you cant die ...we need you!

holy snot this is just too crazy. but i'm still puzzled as to the Naraku's ....

Wonderful story artfully written and a really refreshing take on the tale over all

hmm, i love this story but i think i am starting to get a tad confused. Which Naraku was that, and then Whom did Kags kill in chapter two with the gun? O_o i'm up for almost anything at this moment, though i must say i bet the outline you have of this story if you have one is CRAZY! love it - r0o