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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! new chapter!!! i am so happy!!! even through it was kinda short. Update soon!!!! k?
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story. I hope that you will update soon.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying your story please do not wait to update for too long
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far please update soon, I wonder why the fathers meddled in the first place.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is different and interesting. I would like to see more. If you are worried about your spelling and grammar (which isn't really bad) you can post under betas for someone to beta your chapters before you post them.
I only spotted a few mistakes, but they are very common ones such as "Lets" when it should be "Let's" and little things like that.
I only spotted a few mistakes, but they are very common ones such as "Lets" when it should be "Let's" and little things like that.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please PLEASE continue on with it it is a wonder full story and i would really like to know what is going to go on with Sesshomaru and Kagome