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schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a morbid little song Kouga was singing! But it really did work despite the circumstances. Did you make that up, my dear? If you did, heck, I wish I could do that!
I have sooo many questions on this chapter but I have a feeling that I will find out with the next chapter.

Wonderful job! I still love Jak and hell, he got laid himself so that super relaxed Jak is extra cute. The part about him having a sister, that was just sweet. I like the little reference to 'Favorite Things' when talking about the snowflakes on Inu's nose and eyelashes -gush-. It just started snowing here in Portland when I read that part so it made me grin.

Thank you for all of your hard work with this fic!

Ezzy
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah!!! And Merry Christmas to you and yours!! Have a safe and wonderful holiday!!
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! great story so far.... mistletoe xD
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two days late?! Hell, who cares! That chapter was wonderful and...HOT! Oh man...how great was that!? Under the Mistletoe...that's just an sweet touch that I thoroughly enjoyed!

I have to wait a few days for the update, but don't mind in the least. It gives me something great to look forward to :) -hopes she gets to see Kagura get bitch-slapped and Kouga gets whats comin' to him-

Awesome chapter, my dear! As always, I look forward to reading much, much more from you in the future!!

Ezzy
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! And the graves...that was sad and something that I can totally see for Sesshoumaru. He would want them to be close and see that place as almost sacred. *hugs sesshoumaru plushie*

I know there was something else I was gonna mention...but I think my age is starting to catch up with me, lol.
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so so so so so goooood! and now i don't have to turn the heat up. that has to be the hotest christmas celebration i've ever read. that haku is a real brat, but it looks like sesshou has his number. such a good story! i do feel sorry for kagura, how sad and embarrassing to not realize its over.
person JenLazar
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOooooohhh!!!!! I absolutely loved this. Have I told you before how much I love the uber long chapters? I sooo do! Now I must admit that I read this the night you posted but by the time I got online it was already in the wee hours of the morning and I know I'm usually am up and all but hubby decided I looked too pale and he made me sleep with him on guard until 1 am. He then went to work and I woke up at 5 am and read Chapter 4. I really wish we could have stayed with the first few paragraphs as they were really getting quite enticing.But even so you didn't let me down. InuYasha bought a dog? My guess it's to help bind Kagome and her kids with Sesshoumaru. After all, what's cuter than a puppy to fawn all over on and bring a family together? And someone needs to put Sesshoumaru in his place on the fact of using angry "colorful metaphors" when he's just been fogging up the windows with those delictable kisses and getting it on in other ways with his "perverted" boa. I'm surprized Kagome didn't put him in his place and make hime forget what was happening with the sleigh and tree. Throw the cell into the back seat. With that house load who knows when there'll be time for FUN. Geez, I didn't think Kagura would stay once she saw children and Yuletide decorations hurriedly being put up. I am totally in love with Jak. He's such a stress reliever. Now he just got himself another "toy" to play with. Kagura's lose is Jak's gain. Holtz is already fitting in...according to Jak. I do wonder more now then ever about Kagome's "sight". The old man got sick and Sess saved him with open heart massage and they had to take that memory from Kagome? See, I knew you had something going on with this when she first saw InuYasha's ears. Quite intriguing, my girl, quite. I didn't understand Jak's reaction. It would make me ask why and what did I do wrong. The scene with the pup was adorable. Now you're gonna have everyone wanting a pup like that. Sounds like a most busy and old fashioned Christmas for Taishou Manor. I'd love to write more because I felt bad for going back to sleep after reading this the other night. I just keep looking forward to each and every new posting that I fight my meds to read them. Love Ya!!! JEN
person Akay
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm... so I'm kinda backdated on some questions that I been meaning to ask you. Are you ready? Sure you are... you always are: Is Sango under the same spell Miroku and the others are?; Are Shippo, Kanna, and Hakudoshi demons still?; Um, I had a question about Houjo, but it's no longer relevant. You kinda answered that question somehow in one of those chapters... though I do have to ask what is going on between Houjo and Inuyasha? I'm kinda lost on this situation.; Why did that guy pass out? Who is he really? and I think that about sums up my questions. I think I ask them more for me than you because I know you're not gonna answer them directly. It just reminds me of what I'm looking out for. Lol.

Ew gross he just cut the dude wide open right in front of Kagome's eyes. I probably would have died right then. Kagome did well to pass out. *shivers* Woah. And what did they do to her? Why did Jak had to all of a sudden act that way towards her? Hm... so I guess I did have more questions. Haha. I've been waiting so impatiently for this chapter and now I'm even more impatient than I was before. This story is awesome!! Duh.

Sessh is still hot with glasses. And I so guessed it was a puppy, but the fact that it was for him caught me completely off guard. Why would they get him a puppy? Interesting... what are they up too? I wanted a puppy for christmas, but my family are being butts and it doesn't seem like they want to get me one. So I asked for a hamster and they laughed... those jerks. Anyway. I'll be waiting for the next update next weekend... on the edge of my seat.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
girl, when was the last time i told you that you are brilliantly imaginative? now i know where i want to spend MY Christmases. you do such a good job of creating a lovely, captivating story. if you were here, i would be begging and pleading for another chapter, just one more, please, please, pretty please? i'll be really good...

janer
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love, love LOVE the puppy. Fedora? Isn't that the hat that Indiana Jones wears? Boy things are starting to get really interesting. What did they do to Kagome after she passed out? I guess I will have to e patient and wait for the next chapter.