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for Unexpected Encounter

by DarkMoonQueen

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
any they have babies and live happily together
person sugar0o
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um... well i like the story but the last chapters just left a little more being wanted. like why isn't Kags with Sess in the future, do they have kids or live happily ever after. why is it that sessh didn't smell himself on Kags when she came home? i dunno thats jsut what i was wondering. still a good short story.
person Cassandra
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In the first chapter you described how Sesshomaru questioned Kagome about being in the future. In the next chapter or so you then spoke of Sesshomaru having watched her from afar since the day she was born. Maybe you meant to inculde that he just wanted to hear what she had to say? Anyways, great story, well written, few errors. The sudden installment of that little bit of information made me wonder. Could of flowed a little better into that. :) Happy Holidays
person Crysan
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is a nice update please post another soon
person Crysan
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job on lenthening the chap i really do enjoy this story!
person sugar0o
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story thus far, but i really wish it didn't same Complete, its not, other then that i have no complaint.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it!
person Crysan
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While the Chapters are awfully short I like the story line, please update again soon.