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for Secrets beneath the Surface

by SesshysRose

person Ppalae1
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I read your story on Dokuga.com all 14 chapters and all I can say is wow!!!. I feel really sorry for Kagome being pregnant again by Sesshomaru and with twins boys too. And to watch Rin her first and only daughter grow up without being there for her, just watching her thru the shadows. It was really heartbreaking for her and for me the forgive me I'm soft. I really cried when she left for America to live with Sota. And its also sad that her mother isn't there to comfort her in her time of need. I'm glad Rin got Sesshomaru's mind working overtime and he and her are there for Kagome. I hope everythng turns out right for them. And Kagura getting whats coming to her ASS!!! MEAN BITCH!!!. Giving that child somw nasty tasting medicine to hide how pretty she is. I hope she gets it really good. All in all this story is all thumbs up in my book. Sad but very good. Can't wait until you update...Keep up the good work ^___^
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?