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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story! It was mostly sex (or descriptions of it), and it was was very HOT! But, believe it or not, that wasn't my favorite part. I liked your characterization best of all. Considering the circumstances, all of the characters were very IN character. Inuyasha, in particular, was done well, but Kagome wasn't far behind. I definitely enjoyed this. Good job.
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was refreshing! I love the useage of detail and adjectives. You've done a splended job here. Thank you for writing!!!
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was more than fun, I haven't read such a fantastic lemon for a while. I look forward to read more from you!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job. A fun read. I enjoyed every word.
Patty
Patty
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. And I could just see it all happening, too. However, I think my favorite line was, “Can’t I just kill something for her instead?” That was so InuYasha!