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for Of Dog Gods & Mortal (new version)

by bookworm810

schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I couldn't BELIEVE Kikyou's jealousy! Like, I haven't seen a REAL BITCHY KIKYOU in a long time. I mean, a REALLY long time. GOOD job with her! No, GREAT job with her! It's been a while since I've read about a KIkyou I just wanted to strangle nonstop, lol! But yeah, I'm in SUCH love with with this story! It's really good, very detailed and VERY original! I like it a LOT! KUDOS! Biiig kudos! And the love scenes were GREAT!!!!!! Can't wait for the update!!!!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i kinda actually feel sry for kikyo...she needs to open herself up with the villagers so she could get some backup or support at least. ...well, not me fault! xD

update soon!

Kimiko =D
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I noticed you haven't updated this or the "Master" story. I hope you haven't abandoned them because the plots were very interesting and I was really enjoying them - you area an engaging storyteller. I know real life can get insane so I understand any hiatus ... I am just hoping it isn't permanent.
person osherry
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I enjoyed your story thus far... please keep posting. I'm waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update... glad that sango & kagome are getting better... what is the prophecy they are talking about... will sango talk to kagome about her & inuyasha... will there be another priestess in the temple... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
person DPrincess
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this version much better then the first!! PLEASE update really, really soon!
person nmos
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a pretty good chapter.
I think that you should be happy with it, except for a couple of typos which aren't that important.
person debEdoo
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... I'm so excited to hear what their destiny holds for them. I can't wait to read about how they overcome it. I'm thinking that Inuyasha will either come to the Gods and ask to become mortal or ask that Kagome become a God or granted eternal life or whatever. Either way, I love it!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter was good. It was nice to see Sango in that stage ^_^. It was also cool to see Kagome getting braver. Very cool and can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, can't help but laugh at the face miroku must have showed when he came back- and really great chapter!