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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its a good start, but I say go a little bit more in depth with it. Other then that so far, so good.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i like keep going!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, interesting! I can't wait to see where you go with this. The only corrective criticism I have is don't rush into the story...your tone at this point, in this chapter seems rushed to me....Try to slow it down...very good start though! :)
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the tips.Great story,maybe you should think about a sequal.:)
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its grat cant what for more.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning...I like it when Kagome is the strong lead and doesn't take shit but don't take it too far and make her a complete bitch is all i ask :) cant wait for the next update - lolo
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luv tha first chapter and cant wait for the next chapter!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start. More?