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February 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Is that the ending?
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September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!
that is so fucking hot!!
Can't wait for the next chapters!!
that is so fucking hot!!
Can't wait for the next chapters!!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quite different, like the doctor idea
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quite different, like the doctor idea
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, like where this is going. Now just gotta wait for the next chapter
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The spacing isn't to bad. For tips why not look over other authors writing styles and incorporating them into your own. Maybe two short chapters could be made into one instead, it looks better to me, but that is just opinion. But so far good job, love the little scene ^_~. Hope to see more, and good luck with your writings!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright so I am not really sure how to space it so it doesn't look bad any tips would be great