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for The Best Laid Plans...

by Smurfette

schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can guess who the girl is. Nicely done! I look forward to reading more of this story. If you could apprise me of when you post again, I would be most grateful. talene02002@yahoo.com
person evasal
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh please update soon! i can't wait for sesshomaru to see this new kagome (man does she know how to burn holes in her pockets!)

person ladyai21
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im glad that you had updated so soon. i liked the fact that you have kagome atually capable of protecting herself, was able to fight and knowledgeable about things. I didnt really like the ending but again you had your reasons for its abrupt ending, so i guess i could let it go ;-) keep up the good work and i look forward 2 reading more of this story.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! It's awsome so far! Update soon, Okay? I can't wait to see Sesshomaru's reaction to Kagome's seducing skills.
person ladyai21
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far. Its definitely not rushing and i like that. some stories tend to rush whats going on and kinda leaves the reader dizzy.but you definitely did a good job in making the story more belivable and have the reader, such as me wanting 2 know what comes next. i give this story 2 thumbs up so far.Keep up the good work.

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