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for The Best Laid Plans...

by Smurfette

person Sess/Kagome
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think you should make the last chapter about her finally getting marked and them doing it.
person snowbird
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hellooooooooooo! Where are you??????? Did you give up on this story? It's been FOUR MONTHS! Please let your readers know something with an A/N. Should I continue to keep this story on my fav list or remove it?
person sugar0o
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i love this story hopefully we'll see another chapter again.
person snowbird
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This second review is asking, no begging, for an update. It's been two months. Please, please.
person snowbird
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heehee. I like this story. He was deviously cute in getting Rin to be his accomplice. Rin's just the type to enjoy doing something like that. I was picturing in my mind Kagome exercising and seeing him tilt his head from side to side like a normal dog watching something and trying to figure out what's going on. That was a funny and cute scene. After they eventually mate, he might just get her to repeat some of those positions with him. hahaha. I eagerly await your next update.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just found this story and i it!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I will be keeping an eye out for your next update. Till then, take care.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this so much. what a fun and intriguing story. i can't wait to see the seduction begin. but who will be seducing who???
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! new chapter! i was wonderin gwhen i would get a new one!
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! hehe I am enjoying your story immencely! Please continue!

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