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I am so in love with this story! I can't wait to read chapter 5!!!! Update quickly please!!! B reading U!

Would love to know what Sesshomaru said to Miroku, but that can wait - maybe at lunch- but poor InuYasha- he has to get over this--- they belong together, and that is all there is to it!

This story if off to a very good start. The only thing negative to comment on is Sesshoumaru's characterization. You have all of these ! after every other sentence of his, and that really doesn't fit into his character. Don't get me wrong, when you write fan fiction you tend to mold the character to your own perspective and such but; bottom line, Sesshoumaru was never excited at all in the series like your making him here in you fan fic, and it just doesn't read very well. Please use periods instead of random exclamation marks after his dialog. Thank you for posting this, and please take my comments into consideration.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!! I hope this is a Sess uke story.

:) I am loving it!!!!!

New update, new update! I'm so happy I'm so happy!!!! I love this! Keep giving the gift baby! B reading U (soon)!

So far so good!!! Will we see and hear about more characters? I like the beginning...very original story.

Love it, love it, love it----- more please- and soon!

Absolutely WONDERFUL!!!!! I love keep it up. I really really like the plot and how it's going. Is there going to be a flash back scene showing how they met?

Aw cute! I hope thigs work out for the both of them! Hope to see an update soon!