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Awwwww why couldn't  she get pregnant in this store though I LOVED IT a prego Kagome  and a horny Sesshomaru would have killed 5 star rating.  But anyway I love it hope for more chapters 

A great story looking forward to more.

I loved this fanfiction!!!!!! It was wonderfully written! The only thing that bothered me was the last chapter where word vomit ensued!!!! Paragraphs darling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Woosh! That was some hot stuff. I don't know maybe it could have been little longer... *grin* Anyway, ya' gonna write that sequel? Pretty please?

All I Can say is WOW! That has to be just about the most detailed lemon I've ever read, and it was a damn good one. Awesome job!

Amber

please write the next chappie and also the next story would be good!

Sunset Miko's LJ tipped me off to this story and I am so very very glad she did. It was wonderful! Your lemons were hot and playful with just the right amount of raunchy-ness (is that a word?) and emotional connection between the characters. While I loves me a good smut-work those types rarely interest me beyond one-shots. Your story had smut, action, and character depth. You also developed the relationship between them very nicely. I am in awe. You kept the heat all the way through and wrote a piece that I am sure to re-read in the future and place in my hall of favorites. If you decide to write an extra lemon or start the sequal could you be so kind as to email me at IndigoMiko@gmail.com. Thanks!

The last chapter is really squished together making it hard to read. There aren't any paragraphs in it to separate things. >_< But I love this story! Everything else in the whole story is great! Maybe AFF.Net just screwed up your paragraphing?

After a recommendation from Sunset Miko's LJ site, I decided to read your lemony story, and boy oh boy I am happy that I did! It was great! Really, the lemons were just delicious! I sooo loved the blindfold and whip scenes, but I am such a hentai that you probably are not surprised at that. lol! Now, I have plans to go to the grocery store tomorrow and I intend to buy several pounds of fruit for my man. I wonder if I feed him lots of peaches, will he turn peachy? Oh, and maybe some strawberries and banana's! Then it will be like drinking a smoothie when he cums! HAHAHAHA! God I am a sick bitch. I thought that part of your story was hilarious. Anyway, loved it all. It was great. Thanks for the read!

~Rin

First of all I want to say that this is NOT just another lemon!! This is an incredibly fantabulous lemon! I am definately looking forward to the sequel (and hopefully the K-heat chappie too!) Way to go Tiegrsi, keep it up!