rate_review Reviews

great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome are getting closer... the first concert seem to go well and sweet that inuyasha sang the song he made for kagome & announced that he loved her too... then they did it in his dressing room... guess inuyasha couldn't hold back anymore... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...

OMFG! *Pops Champagne* He said it! he told he he loved her! *SQUEEEEEALS* Champagne for all! lol! Man, this story just has a HOLD on me! You are an amazing author, great job!!!!!!!

~Sho-Chan~

*SQUEALS HYSTERICALLY* YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! They totally kissed! Oh, gosh, Inuyasha is such a sweetie! Looking forward to the next chapter, it really is great, lol! (And don't worry, me and my bf told each other we loved one another in about a month of dating and that was almost three years ago! Though, I can't compete with marriage, lol!) I hope you and your hubby have many happy years together! Many children! lol, j/k, I just felt like I needed to say that, lol.

Love always,

~Sho-Chan~

great update... glad that kagome is fine and getting better... and that they got the envelope too... nice that kagome remembers what happened that night... but she didn't hear what inuyasha said after though... cute how inuyasha is paying attention to kagome so much... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...

i love you? i think it's a little out of nowhere and too soon. but yeah, i trust you've got something interesting up your sleeves. update soon!

oh finally they're admitting some of their feeling at least, it was two really good chapters ^^

nice reviews. this is quite the adorable story.

I love this story so much. I've got it bookmarked and I check it every night! The storyline has me hooked!

*puts down the popcorn and wipes her fingers carefully.* Hey, I was reading that! Oh, the chapter ended. MMM. . .some powerful emotions at work here for such a short time knowing each other. But I know those all too well. I can't wait to see where this is going. YUM-O!!

I'm really enjoying this fic. I've seen it here before ,but never really took the time to sit down and read it. I'm glad I finally did today. You write very well and it's a shame that you were never published. The idea of how Miroku got his wind tunnel is a brilliant one. The concept of the Shikon of also very original. I really like those ideas. Your chapters flow very nicely and I haven't noticed any grammar or spelling errors. I only have one gripe.

It's probably just me but it seems like you use "said" way too much.It seems after every line someone says something it reads "said ______ "
I know I'm picky but it's just something I hate reading over and over. You have great talent and when I read that constantly it feels like it's taking away from that beautiful word flow. Make sense?

Other than that I think you have a wonderful story. I'm really looking forward to more updates.