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for Shiver Woman Shiver

by Knittingknots

person Ruuka
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL, i love the ending. It's funny.

^_^ Ruuka.
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Last line made me laugh.
person adeaneri
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was execlent writting wow you really had me there for a minute. "dont forget the ramen"

i was expecting blood shed loved it.
person Kijo52
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, that was great.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh.... i loved it! ^_^
it was great.
and the ending caught me by surprised.
amazing rhyme scheme and the flow was great.
delightful treat for halloween!
person madmiko
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! What a perfect IY Halloween poem!! I salute both the concept and the execution. ^_^