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for The Beads

by VampireKitten

person SoulMore
schedule June 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How come you stop it there?! Nooooo, this can't be the end! You have to keep updating, please! I adored the concept of this fic, and would more than love to read the rest of it!

Email me when you update, please: jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
come on vampire kitten finish this story please...................
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok great story now u need to finish this I want Moooooooooooooore ok
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is weird, putting a review in my own story...eh, anyway, thanks to all of you that reviewed. Let me answer some questions. I don't remember exactly who asked them all, so just assume I'm talking to you. Kay. ^^

First off, somebody mentioned Miroku's eyes are purple...or they thought they were purple...they probably are purple, actually...but I was so lazy with the story that I guessed they were brown. ^^; Sorry. This is what happens when you decide to spew a story out without worrying about accuracy or quality...oi.

Um...what else? Does Sango know about the rape...? Yes, yes she does. When Sesshoumaru says he's laid a claim on Miroku, she knows he means he's HAD Miroku, you know what I mean? That seems really vague and kind of dumb, but that's what I'm going with...again, sorry...^^;

Um...Mizuki, right? I'm not sure what the Cake series is; despite my name I've never actually ventured into the Vampire section. Ironic, ne? I'll take a look at it though; bout time I got out of the anime and original sections. And about Ambrosia Empire, nothing different from my review on its...prequel. That's all I can say. I do wish there'd be an update on it, though, I was getting into the plot...not that I can say that, since I've sworn off reviewing that story. Yeesh.

If I've forgotten any, I'll get back to them next chapter. Right now, I'd like to ask for some constructive criticism from anyone who feels they've got some good advice! ^^ I've got a bit of a tingling to make this story slightly less like crap sometime in the future. It's so rough; could use smoothing out.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^^ I THOUGHT YOUR NAME LOOKED....um...whats that word...spelled with an F....fimillar...idk
you reviewed for the..Cake series in the Vampire area right? right?...right?

loved the story ^^ i never thought of sesshy and miroku together s'really hot.

btw what did you think about ambrosia empire?...and don't worry about those girls...their just
sex hungery... *sighs*
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
these chapters are very interesting & I hope you'll write another chapter soon.
person mamarita
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, everyone knows about M x S.. YAY!! Now let's get to the good stuff! DLS
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great that you updated!