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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is very good- you have a couple of spelling and grammar errors but nothing too bad. Let the war begin!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Iam usually a fan of Sess and Inu, but this story is cute!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting and i like it quite alot...good job so far keep up...:p
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is quite an unusual story. I don't mind the pairing, but it's gone very quickly from declaration of love to new pup/kit, and just what does Sesshomaru have in mind? I hope you update soon!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a cute story- you really need a beta, though. Keep the updates coming, please.
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww a cute story cant wait to see if there is more :D hehe
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I give nothing but constructive critism when I say this because its obvious that your new to this. You have several spelling mistakes, you harldy have any correct sentence structure(you put everything together horribly), and your quotations aren't even close to where they should be. Also, if you wan't the story to be anygood at all it needs much more detail then what you've put into it. It would be best to look at other peoples stories on this page, so that you can get an idea of how to set up your story. I would let you look at mine but I've taken mine off for the moment to revise them. Good luck with your writing.