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Hey, i think it's interesting. Not too many fics like that, it is interesting to read.

I really hope that I am doing this story good. This is my first one. I want any ideas or comments to make it better. :D thanks me

sweet...

You're doing great! This chapter was just awesome! Thanks for making this chapter easier to read, the spaces helped alot. Don't worry about InuYasha being a girl. There are plenty of authors that have done the same, with great results. Myself included ;D! Keep up the good work and as always~ B reading U!

hehe this is a really good story i can't wait to se inuyashas reaction

nice chapter can't wait to see if seshomaru really does take inuyasha for a mate

You know, I love this story! It's awesome and you're doing a great job. But... There is one thing. I think it would read alot better if you space your paragraghs. It's kindof hard to follow sometimes, and spacing would help people determine who is speaking and where the actions is taking place. Like in the first chapter, when you jumped from Sesshomaru to Inuyasha and her pack. You should have said something like "With InuYasha and her pack", or "In the Forest", or "On the road". I would have maked what's happening and who it is happening to better. Remember put a space in between your paragraghs, and the story well flow better. Other than that, you on to something good. Keep it up! B reading U!

Why is Inuyasha a girl?

very good story please continue writing i want to read more...hehe i bet sashomaru ends up mating inuyasha somehow

Because i thought that it would be interesting. I mean come on..it is fic and i am just trying it.