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for Inuyasha's Truth

by ItaKagome

person laica
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like it it has a certain cham to it
laica
person mamarita
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story- knew the battle was going to have the desired outcome... Only little criticism is the mushiness of the talk between Sesshomaru and InuYasha... it was so sweet I am going to have to see the dentist for a check up to be sure I don't have any new cavities. (hahahahahahahaha) Please write more, but remember who Sesshomaru is and what he would really be like, even if truly in love with InuYasha... A little less sugar from him would be more appropriate
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh thank you baby love you i was glad to do it and very nice chapter by the way hehe hugs and kisses
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter can't wait to read the next one
person mamarita
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 sets the tone for rest of the story, actually.. You know there is someone in China who could technically take over if InuYasha decides to leave- and there will be fight to get InuYasha back, but I think it would be nice if the Lord of the Eastern China lands helps InuYasha's cause! Just an opinion on how to take it.. Oh, and although I loved MY grandfather dearly- I hate this SOB that is InuYasha's... how dare he.............
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a lot better than the last one. i got one having him sitting at the front of the boat think about iun and him doing the same thing. they both share a shiver or a little more. just a though.
person mamarita
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If Sesshomaru doesn't go after InuYasha and their pup, I will hunt you down and do terrible things to you!!!!
j/k---- he better go after his mate, what kind of Inuyoukai would let his mate and pup be taken from him- get a grip- they mate for life!!!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe your welcome...i do hope kagome knows btter then to try and hurt inuyasha please keep writing i look forward to reading more
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was very sweet. the sex was not bad at all. looking forward to see if he lets her fight.
person mamarita
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting little twist there. I think it would be wise to mate those two- but I suspect that the Chinese connection may not be too far away..... can't wait for the update.