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by Meggiez

schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this yesterday morning, but I was late for work and couldn't review. Tickled fucking pink, I am, that you continued this. Liking Inuyasha's spat w/InuMama. I should draw, but I suck at it now. My stuff is more Van Gogh now...maybe I should cut my ear off. Anyway, I'm happy about this. Yes indeedy bobby.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting...I would like that Inuyasha become pregnant...that would be very interesting...
update soon!please
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn.. so good yet again. I so wanna see those too happy together.
Update soon!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quick question. Are you a fan of Lian Hearn? Something in your chapter reminded me of her stuff ^o^ I love it *needs to re-read the Otori series now* XD
person mamarita
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well. looks like you have a good start. So, Sesshomaru is going to come to the conclusion that he really loves his little brother. And will it also come out that InuYasha has the ability to bear pups? I can't wait to see what happens next! And if Sess and InuYasha do get together- what will his mother think?
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SQUUEEEE*

Iono if you'd like Lian Hearn's books but they're based in a 'fantastical Japanese region." They're really quite good ^^

ANYWAY! OMG! Well, I'm not into threesomes, but... I will say that if you already have it planned out to be described in as much detail as Inu and Sess' encounters then I'll deal with it. I do really like the female you've picked though, and how you've had her described; she seems rather pleasant ^^. I just hope nothing horrible/horrible goes on T_T WAH!

Looking forward to the next great update!!


-DM
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I understand perfectly what you mean about Mpreg, and respect your decision, but I'm also glad you are going to make her only a breeder. I love your story and I hoep to read more soon. Brilliant work. :)
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...threesomes are really not my thing...lol...but I can see where you're going with that. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are so close that they share everything, I just hope that its more Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru after Sesshoumaru is done with the girl...or whatever detailed about sessinu..lol. I'm a sap...I just can't help myself. I jumped up for joy when I realized you updated.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again...great chapter! Left me with a cliffy though! I don't mind waiting for the smut, but when it does come...make it good =D I want a real good spanking scene somewhere in there to! haha..I know, I'm needy.

Keep it up!
person nchsmi
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm fine with your choice not to make this a mpreg. I can even live with the fact, that Sess has to be with someone other than InuYasha. It's all good! Muhyou seems like an alright type of girl, very interesting! I just yoai smut and InuYasha getting the best of Sesshomaru! I just don't want some random female getting in the way, of how Inu and Sess raise the kid! Sess should be more understanding of what InuYasha wants. Inu wants a family. One that he never had! Get The Lead Out Sesshomaru! Give Inu the security he's longing for! And, Sess' mother really needs to be put in check! I loved what InuYasha did to her, drawing his sword on her in the first chapter was great! She needs more of that! Thank you so much for the heads up, I really appreciated it! This story is great, keep it up! One question, does this mean that 'You brought it on yourself' has ended or is there one more chapter to it? I know that this is a sequel, and all. But, the story doesn't say *completed* at the end or in the summary, so I'm not sure. Anyhoo, love the update, write more soon. B reading U!