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I THINK I SHOULD WORSHIP AT YOUR FEET!! lol. It was beautifully written, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha made sure that the female did her job and they were still very much involved with eachother. I totally love it!! HEHE. Even though there was a girl present, I still thought Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha were hot. Genuis work. Can't wait for next chapter.

That was amazing!!

Ahh! That's good *phew* I was scared for the brothers! Wah! Oooh, but the sex was great (I tried to figure out how the whole arm thing worked but couldn't quite wrap my mind around it lol)! Eee! I will say that while threesomes aren't something I like, I actually look forward to how it'll go about with your characters! Muhyou seems really cool, and the fact that Sesshomaru has no feelings for her, and Inuyasha is hopeless without his brother, will make the threesome less...iono lol! I love jealousy so if Inuyasha (he's participating, too, right?) makes a gentle gesture toward Muhyou during the breeding, Sesshomaru gets jealous and rougher! Yosh! XD *imagination carries her away* lol I'll take notes from you on the threesome, cause while I don't like them all that much (with a very few exceptions), I'm thinking of writing one (as a side story) for some side characters of one of my fics under my other alias. *gets out a pad of paper and a pen ^^*

Aside from that, I like how Inuyasha has matured in your fic. While he's hot headed he does stop to rationalize when it comes down to it, or listen to the advice of others (like with Muhyou). I 'awwd' at that part ^^ Yosh! So I'm anxious for the next chapter (and more inusesst and threesomeness!)

XD

Update when you can! ^o^


-DM

Still here...still ready for more!

I think I get it! Now, tell me if I'm wrong, but Sess is having 'Mother' issues isn't he? His mother wasn't mom of the year material, so he figures that every woman is the same. But, if InuYasha can get over his dissappointment with women & try. So why can't Sess find a way to work through it? I think Sesshomaru is jugding by the wrong book. I mean, InuYasha had a mother. And, from what I can tell, she was great!

Preach, child! I know exactlly what your talking about!!! Honey, I got a house full of them! I may have given birth to 6 kids, but it feel like 7 with my husband!!!! 3 little boys and a grown up little boy, oh boy! Great job on this chapter, the smut was excellent! B reading U!

I just love your Sess/Inu Smut, it something new and totally hot. lol...I have never enjoyed reading stuff like that, but you make it work. :) I don't have the courage to write it myself but its nice to see something like this with great depth. (pun intended) hehe

YAY!!! A sequel *does happy dance* I gotta tell you, I for one am glad to know I’m not the only person in the world who has issues with the whole m-preg thing in InuYasha yaoi (and I was seriously starting to think that I was o_O). Personally, I see it as a copout: “don’t like Kagome but Shessy’s hot, so write slash and then bend and twist until it fits a het storyline come hell or high water – little details like believability and characterisation be damned!” Harsh, I know, but I’m of the humble opinion that if you wanna bend the laws of nature, you need to lay some serious groundwork and most authors just don’t bother. Don’t get me wrong, I’m all for artistic licence and I have come across a total of two m-preg stories in my entire life that I liked (neither of which were in the InuYasha fandom by the way). I think a story swims or sinks on a reader’s ability to identify with what they’re reading and more often than not a guy with a baby-bump just isn’t gonna cut it with me. What I adore about this story, is that I can totally see it. I always thought that InuYasha would want a family dearly after the life he’s lived and you are honestly the first yaoi author I’ve ever come across to deal convincingly with the subject. Again, great work and thanks for a fantastic read ^_~

Okay, so AGAIN I'm reviewing because... you know what your story did to me?! X_X lol I actually dreamed about it. Really freaking weird. I've never had that happen before. Ever. (Not that I can remember anyway lol). And because of this dream (I don't remember it in detail just that when I woke up I know it had to do with a story I read and then realized it was yours, and it brought up a bunch of questions I didn't see to ask the first time around).

So. Here are my questions/comments/concerns.

Sesshomaru let the viewers know of his doubts of having children with a female while his mate was Inuyasha because, regardless, if it was common among youkai for females to give up their young, some wouldn't and would never let go of their child and become like his mother, right?

And then this female called (goes back to look)Muhyou is part wolf and part dog demon (and therefore a half-breed like Inuyasha, though a full youkai). From her mother, the ookami, she is possibly able to have a litter of pups/cubs. And if she were to be chosen by Sesshomaru to sire children with her condition was that she could keep one herself, and that child would have a certain amount of protection.

Now, assuming I got that all right, what happens if she only has one pup (like from her fathers side of dog youkai do as opposed to the litter her mother's side has)? Then what? Will she give the pup up or will she want to keep it?

Also, part of me is scared that Inuyasha will take on the role of 'father-to-be' to this female (not in a sexual sense, just in a caring, protective way) and, while that's good and sweet I wonder how, if it does happen, it'll affect Sesshomaru. He already has huge doubts, thinking Inuyasha wants to be with females again etc. And since Sesshomaru has discovered that he loves Inuyasha,... Okay, I'm stopping!!! X_X

My imagination is totally running away with me! This is all your fault! LOL. Great job! Now this is stuck in my head and I'm going to go insane X_X lol

But yeah, great story, those are my comments/concerns and I look forward to your next update!


-DM
(ps. You should check out Lian Hearn)

Damn good chapter again. That convo between Inuyasha and Muhyou was interesting indeed. I'm waiting to see what he tols her to say to Sesshoumaru. Hmm, with that said, Kepp up the good work and update soon!