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update update updateupdateupdate!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I can't believe that that was the end of the chapter! please update soon!!! please!!!

Hello.
I just finish reading your amazing fic. I love it! Your talent in this fic is amazing! I could felt what they were feeling. More than once, I actually cried. I felt I was completely inside in this fic like I was there and I could actually see it like it was a movie.

I don’t know how else I could explain of my love for this fic. I LOVE IT! 5 stars and then some in my book.

Are you a novel writer? It was so well written and expressive. I soooo could see you being one. You have a gift to be one like J.K. Rowling and other great writers.

Thank you for your time writing it. I will be waiting on the edge for the rest of the chapters to come. ( I hope I don’t have to wait too long. ;)

Suniko

Wow! That's about all I can say. It has taken me almost two weeks to read from chapter one to chapter 25. I am a fast reader, but even with that it took a good bit of time. I love how your chapters are so long and detailed. I do hope you update soon. I cannot wait to see how cute the pups are ^_^, Ja Ne.

oh candygirl that chapter was great i love the way that sessh grand grand father come in the and help kagome and how he teach sessuhumoru how to turth her. and now she and her mother are in trogble and i hope they get help soon and the story is real good and i have been wait for update on this one .. good luck on the story too.

great story, I've really enjoyed it so far! I cant to see what happens with the ladies after they been taken, hope sess and dad kick some ass!!!!

Your story has a wonderful plot line and is great other than the fact that you keep switching tenses, it's distracting and makes your idea look worse instead of great, try staying in one tense maybe overall wonderful story.

I love this chapter. cant wait for the next update.

Hm... so thats what happened to you. i was wondering where the heck you had gone off too. Well its good that your back and the new Chapter kicks, can't wait til the new ones out... Sorry bout the virus tho that does suck.

post again soon,

Kurai

I like this story very much, and I am sorry about your computer. BTW, your ending authors note sounded like a preview for a tv series! I thought that was awsome, the only reason I say that is because I normally don't read authors notes. well I hope that the next chapter is just as good and that it's out soon,

Ja Ne.
I.S.

I love this story, some of the best writing I've read on this site.