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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please let Seshomaru and Kagome fight alittle!! Please update soon!!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT,PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please tell me you arer writting another chapter...........(gets on hands and knees and grabbs your pants leg)....please oh come on write another chapter already.....do you know how long I have waited for you to finish the forth chapter to this?......I love this story please, please, please write another chapter or chapter's...............PLEASE..WRITE..ANOTHER..CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that chapter was good and i can not wait for more and up date soon. i like the story. up date soon. yr fan.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW, great chapter. I love that you made Kagome a stronger and confident woman. PLEASE update soon!!!:)
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is starting to get good. you have me on edge right now and I expect a nother chapter within 7 days, no later. earler is good, but no later. just issueing out my demands for the week ^_^. Keep up the good work and I look forward towards your next chapter. if you need a beta reader, then I can do it for you. See ya
Dawna Sama
Dawna Sama
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Review chapter four*
One word -wow! I love all the action you bestowed on the characters. I love the little love scene. Mother and daughter bonding. I loved it. I wonder what will happen next when Inutaisho and Kagome meet. I can't wait to read the encouter between Sess and Kagome. Great plot and story. I love it!
One word -wow! I love all the action you bestowed on the characters. I love the little love scene. Mother and daughter bonding. I loved it. I wonder what will happen next when Inutaisho and Kagome meet. I can't wait to read the encouter between Sess and Kagome. Great plot and story. I love it!
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Review Chapter Two*
noooooooo! Why did you have to stop here? You're cruel. Lol. Well, that is the point isn't it? when you are writing interesting then you suddenly stop and leave it as a cliffhanger. I'm like that as well. Great story. I read it at a 'A single Spark'. I can't wait to read chapter six. When Sesshoumaru and Kagome meet. You certainly have me hook with this Sess/Kagome fic. Great beginning. You are keeping this story very interesting in every way. One thing I really love about this fic is that Inutaisho has a role. I love that. There aren't many story like that. Well, stories that involve Inutaisho. Some forget about him. I'm glad you didn't. This is one of the reasons why I love this fic. Please update soon. Great work.
Lady Serpentina
noooooooo! Why did you have to stop here? You're cruel. Lol. Well, that is the point isn't it? when you are writing interesting then you suddenly stop and leave it as a cliffhanger. I'm like that as well. Great story. I read it at a 'A single Spark'. I can't wait to read chapter six. When Sesshoumaru and Kagome meet. You certainly have me hook with this Sess/Kagome fic. Great beginning. You are keeping this story very interesting in every way. One thing I really love about this fic is that Inutaisho has a role. I love that. There aren't many story like that. Well, stories that involve Inutaisho. Some forget about him. I'm glad you didn't. This is one of the reasons why I love this fic. Please update soon. Great work.
Lady Serpentina
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Review Chapter Three*
NOOOOOOO! Sorry. I can't help myself, I have to review this chapter. Poor Kagome (:( I felt. I don't know what to feel for Inutaisho in this chapter. I know he is trying to be concious, but he did promised to take of Kagome, but lucking her in the Dungeons...? That is harsh. I would be crying, too, if I get lucked up with no reason. Kagome doesn't know many things and that is why I find it very unfair for her. In the other hand I do understand Inutaisho, as Lord of the house he has to protect his own, but Kagome is know his ressponsibility and he isn't treating her fair. I'll state that. Lol. I don't think that's fair. What kagome wants is to protect the people from getting hurt. I hope nothing bad happens to Kagome for getting shackled up and that shackle making her weak. But if Kagome is that powerful, and I hope she proves it to everyone soon, then she'll escape from the dungeons, I hope. I'll be crossing my fingers to read more action in this story and some little smut as well. Great work once again and I can't wait to read chapter four :)
Lady Serpentina
NOOOOOOO! Sorry. I can't help myself, I have to review this chapter. Poor Kagome (:( I felt. I don't know what to feel for Inutaisho in this chapter. I know he is trying to be concious, but he did promised to take of Kagome, but lucking her in the Dungeons...? That is harsh. I would be crying, too, if I get lucked up with no reason. Kagome doesn't know many things and that is why I find it very unfair for her. In the other hand I do understand Inutaisho, as Lord of the house he has to protect his own, but Kagome is know his ressponsibility and he isn't treating her fair. I'll state that. Lol. I don't think that's fair. What kagome wants is to protect the people from getting hurt. I hope nothing bad happens to Kagome for getting shackled up and that shackle making her weak. But if Kagome is that powerful, and I hope she proves it to everyone soon, then she'll escape from the dungeons, I hope. I'll be crossing my fingers to read more action in this story and some little smut as well. Great work once again and I can't wait to read chapter four :)
Lady Serpentina