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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I've decided I should write you a review for this story since it's the second or third time i'm reading it. It's one of my favorites, I certainly don't mind how you write different points of view's for the characters at all! I honestly think it makes your story different then everyone else's out there. I particularly love the family dynamics in this story, the character's mesh together and act like a real family would, that's what draws and keeps my attention.
One things that bother's me just a little is that your spelling is a little off. For instance, sometimes you write angle instead of angel....and I understand what your saying, it's just a little distracting. But of course when your writing a story this large mistakes happen for sure, so it's not a huge concern.
I'm not a big stickler for grammar at all, and I think in general your story is great for that in general! I find it amusing when some authors review and complain about that when their own stories have the same problems at times.
Anyhow you are a much admired author of mine and I'll continue to look out for your newest chapters in your other fic's.
Ja ne!
I've decided I should write you a review for this story since it's the second or third time i'm reading it. It's one of my favorites, I certainly don't mind how you write different points of view's for the characters at all! I honestly think it makes your story different then everyone else's out there. I particularly love the family dynamics in this story, the character's mesh together and act like a real family would, that's what draws and keeps my attention.
One things that bother's me just a little is that your spelling is a little off. For instance, sometimes you write angle instead of angel....and I understand what your saying, it's just a little distracting. But of course when your writing a story this large mistakes happen for sure, so it's not a huge concern.
I'm not a big stickler for grammar at all, and I think in general your story is great for that in general! I find it amusing when some authors review and complain about that when their own stories have the same problems at times.
Anyhow you are a much admired author of mine and I'll continue to look out for your newest chapters in your other fic's.
Ja ne!
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this has to be my favorite story that i have ever read. I really enjoyed reading it and didn't wanna stop till i finished, however i was so sad when i got to the last chapter of this story i didn't want it to end it was soo good. I am looking forward to reading the new story you are writing i'll have to keep an eye out for it =D
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Amazing story. This is one of the best Sess/Kag fanfics that I have ever read. As soon as you get all of the editing done, this story will be absolutely unstoppable. Congratulations on your masterpiece, and good luck on all of your future fics!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a very well done story and i love you for sharing it, thank you for that.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for such a wonderful story. I hated to see it end, but was pleased with the happy ending. I will be looking forward to your next story when you start posting it. From one Cindy to another, congrats on finishing another grear epic story.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I HATE and LOVE you all at the same time! LOL. I have been reading this story for over 10 hours! (taking breaks, of course! ^_^) But I absolutely love your fanfic. Usually, I am not a fan of the AU type of fanfics. I can't stand the idea of AU because usually, people use it to their own advantage and have the Inuyasha characters completely different then the way they were originally portrayed from both the manga and the anime series. HOWEVER, I noticed, even in the first chapter, that yours was not this way. Although there were some moments where I found Kagome to be a bit whinny(sp?), I found that I loved this story overall! Lol..my family saw that I had basically locked myself in a room this entire time and came in every two hours or so saying, "Are you done, yet?!" I cannot wait for more to this fanfic and I just wanted to say that I have completely enjoyed reading your story. As I just stated, I typically hate reading AU fanfics, especially for Sesshomaru and Kagome, but I must rate your fanfic as one of my top favorites. It's been an honor reading the journey of your fanfic so far, and I cannot wait to see more to this fantastic story!
Ja ne!
~Elenna~
Ja ne!
~Elenna~
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww though i dont want the story to end i cant wait to see just how you do end it. i love this story very very much. ill be waiting for the ending chappy
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah, though it saddened me that this fic is rapidly coming to end, it also excites me now that you will have more time to work on another right (hint... hint... wink... wink)... perhaps fic that more likely to begin with the manga...