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That explanation doesn't sound so bad. Giving out extra chapters if it seems like lots of people want them isn't bad like refusing to update if you don't get enough reviews. I have known people to do this. Not mature at all. I'm glad I misunderstood.

Did the whip come out of the tip of his tail during that fight? It sounded like it and all I could picture was how it would look like he was peeing on Sesshoumaru since it was golden.

OMG!! MORE MORE MORE PLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!

^^ Another well written chapter! I can't wait for chapter 15! Ganbatte yo!

Extortionist....HeHe ok here is your review blackmail...Really great chapter I love this story I hope you keep it up thanks for posting

You have a habit of saying 'he heard the words she had spoken' or a variation of that. That is sooo annoying. We automatically assume he heard her unless you say differently. Do you assume that we're too dense to pick up on this? God, you have no idea how many times I want to grab you by the back of your head and smack your forehead into the table. Or maybe rub your nose in the paper and scold you like a puppy. Not conductive to making you quit but I'm sure it'd be therapeutic to me. You're not the only one who uses a variation of that phrase and I find it annoying every time. It's like hello cpt obvious.

Why do you insist on taking the same scene and rewriting it two or three times just from different pov? Why not combine all the pov's you want to use in the same scene? Just when I think I'm done reading a scene you start the same one over FROM THE BEGINNING only from someone else's pov. Annoying.

The story itself is good but it could be much better in my (unwanted I'm sure) opinion if you fix the two points mentioned above. Then again those are just pet peeves of mine. I've also noticed you changing tenses during the narrative. Be Careful of that a lot of people forget to watch it. I'll still read it anyway since like I said it IS a good story I just think it could be better.

BTW it shows a great level of immaturity to attempt to blackmail your readers. What would you do if you simply didn't have the audience your ego desires to supply you with the amount of reviews you want? Not update for months? Years? Until it's met.

Brilliant! this story is wonderful, yeah there are some pov errors and you tend to repeat phrases but it wouldn't be fun if every writer wrote exactly the same, your grammar is fine for the most part and anyone who has personal peeves just has personal peeves and that's their business. This story is wonderful and you most definitely have my vote for best action because it is the most action packed story in that category. Hope for an update soon !!!

plz update. i have followd frm the beginning and will cry when u finish it. bt plz hurry and put up another chapter

wow that is great that your story is up to a awaird sorry my spell is bad but i hope that you win . for your story is real good and i went and vote for you. and the chapter was great and i love the way that kagome told them about her being from the future and how her dad hurt her. i can not wait for the next and see what happen next to them and see if the guy get her. so good luck and keep writting. be here to read and you are one of my favor authors. up date soon.

I have to say that I am anxiously awaiting the next installment of the story. I love how much of a spitfire Kagome is in the story. She is definitly not going to make it easy for Sesshoumaru is she? I love it. *insert evil cackle here*

love the new chaptert when you write more send em an email please and thanks it the same email you send the message of this chapter too