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for Broken Shell

by klausolas

schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I like muchly! You have a real feel for the character; I mean, obviously not canon with the "loving"... but you've captured Sesshoumaru's mental "voice" very well, and I can totally see him thinking something like this. I'm interested to see what more you write!! =]
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. The "I hate" makes me weak thing for Sess it works. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not a bad start.
person mamarita
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kudos on your first entry into AFF.. well done and quite insightful.
person nchsmi
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice short. But, it's short all the same. I think it has potenial to be more, if you put a little more effort into it. It could develop into something more, gripping! But, it's nice all the same. It has an edgy feel to it! B reading U!