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...WOW.

In general, I like this story. But I have to complain about chapter 40's portrayal of marijuana. As one who finds it to be a very profound, beneficial and spiritual drug, I am offended. You make it look like marijuana turns people into bumbling, obnoxious fools with the coordination of a drunkard. Have you ever even smoked marijuana at all, or more than once? It is not all pointless giggle fits and munchies. Also, contrary to rabidly popular belief, marijuana is NOT harmful to the fetus. There is evidence for that. Perhaps you should do your research before you go dragging marijuana's good name through the mud with such propaganda and stereotypes.

I fell in love with the poem and how you fit the poem into the story, it was beautiful. Can't wait till the sequel.

Oh Wow! That was one heck of a cliff hanger! I'm glad you're going to finish "Job
Description" first, but I can't wait for the sequal.

Luv;
Patty

Hm, originally Sess goes to hell to get Rin, now all the men are going to get the women. Very interesting how you made the final battle at Hakureizan, there was something very epic about that place during the Band of 7 arc.

Looking forward to the sequel.

OMG that was the funniest thing ever. That is exactly how I would imagine the group would be after smoking cannibus lol. I was laughing so I hard I was crying, amazing job.

great story, I have one suggestion you should you Shippo. Kitsune have a lot of powers that have to do with sex. Another popular theme in Kitsune stories in that they gain power though sex. It would also be in character Kagome to let Shippo gain power from sex with her. This is also in line with Shippo obvious crush on Kagome in the manga. The fact that Shippo is a shape shifter would be easy to fix any problem with his age or size.
This would also be a good chance to show Sango's feel about Shippo. Would Sango choose to have sex with a full demon even if its a very dear friend or is that something she won't do even for a close friend. It would also give you space to explore thing between inu yasha,Shippo and Kagome. you can find detail on kitsune online. I think this would Improve the story,other than that great story keep you the good work.

Tantras good one, like the plot line.

I love this story. The interaction between Sango and Miroku is very sweet.

sooo good. Extraordinary! I loved this chapter. thank you so much for posting this story, I really like where it's going. I love reading it so much. I can't wait till you post again to see what happens next!