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for Longing

by deviousauthoress1

person InuYoukai
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last part of the chapter. That was very funny!!
person The Mauve Hand
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. A gay Sessie is very funny, but I must admit that there is a huge part of me that winces when reading it.....but in a good way!
person weyrdkat
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapter! Sessh just gets funnier and funnier. . .and I love Kuri. ..she's awesome!
Can't wait to read more!!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Monkey poo...WTF... I just shat my self from the insanity. Good story.
person Heather
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I really love your idea to make Shippo an adult in disguise. That is just too funny. Your writing is really good too, and although there are a couple of spelling errors, your piece is coherent and not over run with spelling and grammar mistakes, which is awesome! I can't wait to read more of the story. Keep up the good work!
person darkmind
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey.. i like it... i hope you update soon.... . what is it that kagome writes in her diary?....cant wait to read more...