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for Longing

by deviousauthoress1

person Shellnet
schedule January 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

To bad this was abandoned but it was funny and creepy as hell at the end and you probly were about to anounce that kegs is pregnent but this was abandoned but if you didnt lose the acount update alredy 

person weyrdkat
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Devious. . . You must write more. . .it has been too long! While I waver between fanning myself and laughing my lil tushie off, I still notice that the grammar and spelling are good. . .and there is no horrible leet speak, oh Wonder of Wonders. . .and every girl needs a gay friend, even if he is your brother-in-law, and one of the most powerful demons in the Western lands. ..

MORE MORE MORE! *skips away singing some anoyingly appropriate, and catchy 80's pop tune*
person Inuyasha
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snort* I always knew Sess was GAY! *falls over and rolls on the ground laughing* Mr. FLUFFY *laughs some more* FLUFFY SESSY! *laughs so hard eyes tear up* BWAHAHAHAHA FLUFFY! *calms down a bit* Okay, I'm alright. *starts laughing again* BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA, FLUFFY! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
person Mclovin
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is this... (its actually mor ethen just one thing.. quite a bit actually haha so yeah...) first off id like to say you are doing an amazing job with this fanfic! and i would love nothing more then for you to continue on with this. second would be that the way youve done everything, from your research to your execution and using the research is absoluetely awesome. i couldnt ask for a better fanfic. it incorperates everything i love about fanfics into it (that being that it stick with the show some what.. tweaks it.. and kinda makes an alternate ending... i LOVE it). third would be.. PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS!!! i cant ask this enough... please oh please continue. and since i knowwww youll continue just for me haha... dont skip on the hawt hawt raunchy dirty nasty sex scenes. you always gotta love those. so once again... PLEASE CONTINUE!! and i love evrything your doing so far. thanksies!!! and really.. your doing great! dont stop now.
person MrMcBob
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bah. It's been going downhill.
person MrMcBob
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So far (ch2) this story rocks! It's exactly what I've been looking for. If not for the occasional Japanese, I'd think I wrote it without knowing.
person MrMcBob
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapters are a bit short but this chapter (ch5) was funny. Yay.
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this is such a good story. i normaly dont have an account on aff but this story was so good that i just had to get one to reveiw you.
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha!

You know, when I first saw this story around, I wasn't overly interested in reading it, but now that I have, I'm glad I did!
It was so hard to not crack up laughing at times (cause really, I don't need the odd looks from my family!)

Great story! Are you adding more chapters? I should hope so.

<3
Angel
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. kami. that was hilarious. i love sesshy too... but he does make a great gay guy. and dammit.. when is inu-kun going to tell kagome she is pregnant? she is gonna know when she gets sick. he better do it now before she gets REALLY moody. and he thought kuri was bad.... xD please give me more :D