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for Take Me 'Til It Hurts

by szaugg

schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! A bit disturbing towards the end but I loved it :) I always thought they'd be a perfect pairing.
person Desa
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"He likely would have ended up as some warlord’s whore, Bankotsu thought with a chuckle, until he got overexcited one night and sliced the idiot up."
HA!! I love it!!
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THat was soooooooooooo sick but I soooooooooooo loved it lol keep up great writing wooow never thought about them as a couple lol......
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mhmm, really like how ya wrote them.
person Innocent
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
+giggles pervertedly+ so where did the soilder come from and how'd banko-ee miss him? really nice one shot, i think this shot will be the center of my yaoi filled dreams tonight ;p thanks. you're a really good right and great at sex scenes ^.^
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOh... *fnas self* Hot... very hot!! I like! :D
person Ruuka
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, i ... it ...
wow, is really all ihave to say. i could really see this happening,
And i just really love Jakotsu, sooo great job! (:
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
+++++ is not enough! In a word: "fu-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!" DAMN that was insanely hot. Vicious, nasty, and HOT. You are the Inuyasha Smut Master *bows obsequiously* (But I must restrain myself, lest Bankotsu's hotness interferes with my Sesshomaru worship - LOL!)
person industrialmidnight
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! I can actually see that happening, and it was absolutely awesome. I'm still waiting for an update on the Hanyou Monk fic you have, though. Please update ASAP! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful one-shot!
person Raeshi
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't think you write these charaters well?? I thought it was great. I can totally see those two together.