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Hi great story you have going so far. Hm...I think Inupapa should try and make Hikaru jealous...it doesn't seem as though he's completely aware of his feelings for Sesshomaru yet so what better way to do that than to take advantage of Sesshomaru while he's in heat and try to pair him up with someone else then have Hikaru take notice...or I don't know just random ideas. What ever you come up with should be great. Update soon

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!...this is really interesting. I want to know what Inu taisho has up his sleeve also. Perhaps it will involve offering Hikaru to Sesshomaru when he goes into heat...or maybe he has different plans. I hope you have not abandoned this story. It's too good. Please Upate. ^_^

Horrible. Worst story I've read in a long time. OC's always ruin stories.

ah poor little dragon, what's going to happen next? when/will inuyasha be born? please update soon.

Still not receiving due praise for your story huh? Well I enjoy it and so I will review. This chapter was wonderful. I especially enjoyed the part where Hikaru and his Father, Ryokotsusei, were being separated. That was an adorable and creative way of putting it especially the short eye contact between Inu No Taisho and Rykotsusei. However the best part of this chapter was the beating Hikaru received as a punishment to Sesshoumaru, I certainly did not see that coming, very impressive. I hope you continue if not for your own, then for my benefit I enjoy this story very much so far. Though this update seems to have been up for a while, I am just now getting the chance to Read and Review...busy month. But enough of my ranting...please do Update.

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~BlackPhoenix

DAMN! I LOVE THIS STORY I DIDN'T REALIZE THAT SOME ONE OTHER THEN INU OR KOUGA COULD ILLISET SUCH EMOTIONS AS YOU HAVE DONE HERE EXCELENT JOB!!

I'm really interested with this story, although I have a few questions. Does Sesshoumaru "grow" up to where he is all cold and distant. Maybe I'll just have to wait for that, ne? Well I'll wait for the nex chapter to ask more of my questions, I would like to see if they get answered or not with the next chapter. Sometimes the story gives the answers better then its author. lol. ^-^ Can't wait for more!

Hm, I am surprised as to why you do not have more reviews....I find this story very interesting though I usually despise OC's, Hikaru is just too likeable to hate. I hope you are continuing this story, I would like to see where this goes. Update.

~BlackPhoenix

Oooo! Does this turn out to be a Hikaru/Sesshomaru story? I hope so. But moving on...

I love this story so far. Hikaru is adorable and the little one's first meeting was extremely cute despite all the violence. I love how you have each of the boys interacting like both rivals and friends. And Ryuukossei and Inutaisho's willingness to let them fight has me giggling too; I've a feeling they'll have to stop them should they fight when they're older, lest they destroy something.

However, I beg you, please make longer chapters! I'm dying here! Every time I get into the chapter it stops. Either way though, I look forward to your next update. This is going well and has my attention. ^_^

- Woffy